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Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 01:44 CDT
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geez i didnt know my opinion is needed here... WELL OF COURSE I LIKE YOUR WORK!!!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn, that was a good chapter. You just keep getting better and better. Loved the slow build-up early in the chapter, with the appearance of Byakuya being a crater in the road. I also definitely appreciated Ichigo standing up to Byakuya; standing up for what he felt, and for the woman he was falling for. And I definitely loved the hot, needy sex at the end. Please updated again soon!
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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falling huh???? good one man! dont make us wait too long for the next chapter. cant wait!
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Title: OMMG
Reviewed By: copycatter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just for everything, I love your story these hot lemon scenes are top die for!!!
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Reviewed By: renagrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 23:11 CDT
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I knew Byakuya would find them! Great job on portraying the cold relationship between the siblings...and bravo to Ichigo for showing back up, although we knew he'd do that, too! :D And, the end, oh wow, just...hot...
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Reviewed By: TaleWeaver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 12:47 CDT
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Wow. I was actually blushing through most of that last scene. I'm not going to be able to look at a bowl of fruit the same way for months. If I didn't say so before, loved the touch of Ichigo's motorcycle - he's definitely the cycle type. Question: just how long will it be before they have sex on it? (I've heard you can make love on a moving motorcycle, and these two seem adventurous enough to try it! Or there's always testing the kickstand to destruction) Liked the more subtle hints of their growing relationship - these two are pretty much head over heels, even though they're not ready to admit it, even to themselves. Also liked the lingering details you get with a bad breakup - Rukia mentioning Renji's favorite lingerie, and her wanting to burn it. Not to mention, this is going to be one hell of a shopping trip. That IS going to be the next story, right?
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Title: Hey, awuyzaki!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 07:43 CDT
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Does that mean you liked it? *Gives a sly grin to computer* Tituba
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Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 02:16 CDT
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uh... just asking, where the hell do you get all your fuck'n ideas??? or the hot lemon scenes???>=3
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just keep getting better and better. I may never look at fruit the same way again. ;p I'm looking forward to the shopping expedition for Rukia's new lingerie - as well as the burning of the old. Great job!
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Reviewed By: LexaLee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story (particularly) out of all your other stories, because of the rawness of character -- and the way the relatonship between Ichigo and Rukia is described. It definitely helps that you have good grammar and punctuation because so many other writers at MediaMiner don't seem to care. ^^ I'm glad you decided to continue with the oneshot, because then the story can be explored further (Complications. Like if Renji came back again, or they had to finally get to the issue of commitment, or something-- I'd love to see that!) Write more soon! -- Lexa
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sizzling man! (needed a cold shower!) really good story and story line! can't wait for the third installment. totally AU but more so realistic. keep up the good work. pla dont make me wait too long for the third chapter. i,m relly excited how their relationship shall grow. oh yeah, you justmade ichigo look really yummy!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hotness
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Title: ONS
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Utterly beautiful! I haven't read a fanfic for a while that doesn't have a bunch of mistakes. I hope you'll write more Ichigoxrukai fanfics!!!! =]
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 18:12 CDT
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Cool! I'm glad you decided to continue with this. That was incredibly hot seeing Rukia be the one in charge for once. Great (and hot!) stuff!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn hotness will be wauting on your next chapter
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