| "This Sesshoumaru Needs Not A Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More!More!More! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^. Good to have TSNNM back, really missed it, althoug Meery Christmas Mr. Taishou as worth the waiting :D. Mmmmm....I realy like the change in Ayame, she is more mature and it suits her well, but I wanna know what happens next!!! Well, anyway, keep up the good work, thank you for another wonderful chapter and have a nice week!
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was hard to put down for more than a little bit at a time. The twists and turns it has taken keep the reader quite interested in what is happening. The idea of Naraku being a bigger problem than he is; is a great idea. Also I was really surprised with the last bit when Kagome's grandfather showed up in the Sengoku Jidai. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow just wow. I will say this much I stopped reading IY fan fiction because I just felt that everything had been done to death and nothing was original anymore. This story of yours has shown me that the IY community is not totally dead yet and their is still some hope. So keep going on this fic and don't let it die. Keep going I want to really see how this one is going to turn out.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh..I want to know what happens next :((:(( . Btw, loved the Ayame x Inuyasha coupling. I would have never thought of them, so naturally. Great job, another awesome chapter. Thank you so much for finding time to write.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 06:44 CDT
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omfg i loved it update soon XD it was sooooooo coool!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...where did Totosai go to? Guess I`ll have to wait for the next chapter to figure that out. Really nice chapter, quiet but very enjoyable. Ohh..I really love the new development regarding Kagome`s youkai condition and totally adore the Koko thing. Awesome job, thank you for this new chapter.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 22:37 CDT
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Jaken seems to remind me of Dobby to some sort...
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I`ve been waiting for this chapter. Thank you so much for finding time to write it, it`s been a while. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 22:54 CDT
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It would be quite fun to dance around a Jaken head...^_^
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It didn't say whether this was a Sess/Kag fanfic. BUT, I think I found out.
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 19:51 CDT
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Sweet! Another chapter. Some of your grammar could use some work - sentence fragments that should be connected to the fragment previous. Silly little things like that. But overall - this story just rocks. It's compelling, I truly believe the storyline and the character development. It's just fascinating to read.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the plot is geting more and more complex. I really love the ways things are developing. I can`t wait to see what happens next. *Reverent bow* and thank you for finding time to write this.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Allow me to kill him miko, this Sesshoumaru will make it virtually painless," growled the Western Lord under his breath, as he rose, pro-offering his large palm to his Lady, who chuckled. "Nooooooooo… I'll deck him later… I promise." "Hn… acceptable." it should be one hundred points in Creativity and Enjoyment for that little piece above, but alas that can not be so.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 17:47 CDT
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Haha.. silk...
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 21:25 CDT
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*sigh* What were you thinking posting without giving me the preview? *wink* Alright so I enjoyed the surprise, and surprise it was! Wow! I knew you would pull the elements together but I did not expect this! I was expecting a more subdued prelude to the death of Naraku. I humbley await the fanale to come.
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