| "This Sesshoumaru Needs Not A Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quit tormeneting me!They were so close.Damn Inuyahsa! The sex sceen was written well.Not many can do it.It kept me interested.LOL
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Reviewed By: LNluvsHostile17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 10:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
NICE chapter. You write lemons very well.
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Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, SSOOOO GGGOOOOODDDD! I'm really enjoying this fic so far. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: TamaRose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story.You play Sesshomaru really well.Not many people can.I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: LNluvsHostile17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 21:42 CDT
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Thanks for the terms!
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Reviewed By: LNluvsHostile17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's hard to come up with a creative Sess/Kag fic, and you are doing an admirable job. Not to mention you are actually able to form a plotline, something that is sincerely lacking in fanfic. I like this story a lot, but I have one suggestion. You have quite a few japanese phrases, and while this is an anime show, could you cut it down a tidbit? The occasional 'oswari' or 'baka' is fine, but there are many people out (including me) who don't know ANY japanese beyond that. Apart from that, keep up the great work. I hope to read more soon! :D
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Reviewed By: teacup_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 08:32 CDT
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LOL, i luv it. I luv it. i luv it!! This probably the funniest inuyasha fic I've read in a long time, if not ever... You have a fantastic and highly developed sense of humour; dry and witty :) :) and your eloquent style of writing adds to it greatly.- I'm usually not a huge fan of sess/kag coupling but I'm seriously lovin the way sesshoumaru is charactererized!!! keep the chapters coming!!!
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Title: Hotdog?!?!?!
Reviewed By: elle6778 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 08:01 CDT
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LOL! I can't help but laugh at the part where she slapped him (no matter how many times I read it). I would love to see the shock on his face, lol! But he WAS really asked for it, with all the perverted thoughts and all. HAHAHAH!!! HOTDOG?!?!?! *ROFL* You and your one track mind, you hentai!!! Anyway, you know I'll be looking forward to the next one. And I hope that it will be soon, nevermind that my access to internet connection is a little erratic at the moment.
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Title: *Waves* Hello!!
Reviewed By: elle6778 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there!!! Woohoo! It's up!! :) Sesshoumaru is beautifully characterised in this pice, with a nicely balanced amount of dignity, arrogance and of course, maliciousness. Hehe! Of course, all that does not detract from his hilariously serious thoughts. I do think that he takes himself too seriously sometimes. And that is nicely presented in this first chapter. Jaken, as expected, provided the comic relief. His reactions to Sesshoumaru's irritation is really quite funny, but I couldn't help but feel sorry for the poor little demon, lol! He worships the ground Sesshoumaru walks on and the taiyoukai is thinking about how far Jaken could bounce off the cobblestone, haha! Not to mention dripping poison on the poor little thing. I also like the part where Sesshoumaru is irritated with his own beast for thinking about 'certain' stuff, lol! Onwards to the next chapter...
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