| "Heart's Treasures" Reviews/Comments [ 199 ] |
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Reviewed By: cherrytree On: February 17, 2002 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the story! please write more! |
Reviewed By: CCSfever On: February 13, 2002 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fics is great. Please contiune I can't wait to read next chapter. :D |
Reviewed By: Moran On: June 23, 2002 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! YOU UPDATED! I LOVE THIS FIC THIS IS ONE OF THE FICS I HAVE READ MORE THAN 10 TIMES AND THEN SOME. PLEASE UPDATE SOON YOUR WRITTING IS VERY UNIQUE AND RARE TO FIND. I HAVE ONLY READ 5 REALLY WELL WRITTEN STORIES AND THIS ONE IS THE FEW BECAUSE OF THE PAIRINGS YOU ARE ABLE TO FOCUS ON BOTH PAIRINGS WITHOUT MAKING ONE OUT WEIGHT THE OTHER AND I FIND THIS SOMEWHAT AS A GIFT. WRITE MORE AND SOMEWHAT LONGER! |
Reviewed By: brit On: February 10, 2002 01:47 CST
Comment/Review:
it's great! pls. continue! i wanna noe what happened! |
Reviewed By: Moran On: June 23, 2002 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! YOU UPDATED! I LOVE THIS FIC THIS IS ONE OF THE FICS I HAVE READ MORE THAN 10 TIMES AND THEN SOME. PLEASE UPDATE SOON YOUR WRITTING IS VERY UNIQUE AND RARE TO FIND. I HAVE ONLY READ 5 REALLY WELL WRITTEN STORIES AND THIS ONE IS THE FEW BECAUSE OF THE PAIRINGS YOU ARE ABLE TO FOCUS ON BOTH PAIRINGS WITHOUT MAKING ONE OUT WEIGHT THE OTHER AND I FIND THIS SOMEWHAT AS A GIFT. WRITE MORE AND SOMEWHAT LONGER! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko On: February 05, 2002 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this Kawaii fanfic!!!
What happens next????? The last chapter was
a little confusing... ok ok I thought that it
was realy confusing. But rather then that
I liked all the other chapter's that you wrote.
Sooo please continue to write more and ingnore that comment that I made of that the last chapter was confusing. Sooo please continue!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2002 19:15 CST
Comment/Review:
*raises hand and shouts* SYAORAN!! *beams* I knew it was him all along. Great chapter...definately very action packed! The only thing I didn't like was how u used "He" about five times in a row for the beginning of the sentence.
He rode for about thirty minutes when he heard some noises in front of him. He followed the noise hoping to find the girls but the noises suddenly stopped. He stopped his horse and concentrated trying to hear the noise again, but he heard nothing. He looked at the area around him and searched for any signs of the girls' passage and found some. He thanked the light created by the burning castle no matter how ghastly of a thought it was since *he* had forgotten to carry a torch with him to light his way.
You could use "Eriol" sometimes or maybe change the word order.
The chapter is actually really good but if u just changed that lil it would help with the "flow". |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2002 18:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Sakura put his arm around Sakura as she began to get up from the chair she was sitting in to open the gifts.
This was another great chapter and the only mistake I found was the one I put up there. "Sakura" should be Mr. Kinomoto (too lazy to figure out how to spell his first name *sweatdrop* |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2002 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked how you started it out...like a fairy tale *dreamy eyes* lol. I'm a big fairy tale fan but I don't really enjoy reading basically the same thing over so I can't wait to read and see how you'll spice this up. |
Reviewed By: Kero-chan On: January 13, 2002 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More More More more more More More More More More
Continue please!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kay On: January 12, 2002 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its wonderful pls continue this |
Reviewed By: AnimeGRL On: January 03, 2002 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I really liked this story! Please finish it soon!!! I'll be looking forward to it! |
Reviewed By: Spinner On: January 02, 2002 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story I want to know what happens next. It's soooooooo KAWAII!
(Kawaii = cute) |
Reviewed By: death's_ally On: December 31, 2001 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is so nice! pls. have the next chapter soon!!! pls, with sugar on top! GREAT JOB!! |
Reviewed By: secret On: December 23, 2001 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story,I just love it.pls continue |
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