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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 05:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more ok...I would like to read more of your amazing story
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Title: *shed a lone tear*
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 00:32 CST
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wow that was a "moving" piece of fanfic...I mean I really felt into the story. actually its 8:29 am in here and I was trying to finish the paper that I have its deadline as few hours form now=) but I couldnt help it when I saw this in my mail box and I said "lets take a break and get wet!!!" muwhahahaha...anyway you are the goddess of hot fanfics(what I call good plot with heavy smut) and I have to add that I cant wait for the next fic that you have in your head*grins widely* Cheers and cookies for you and other type of cookies for Ichigo, yay!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: BleachedBee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definitely get all tens for this chapter!! My sis, danniluvsinu, told me to check out your stories and I'm so glad I did! I sat and read all of your stories in one day and I am sooo in love with all of them, keep up the good work!! You're really good.
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Reviewed By: intercostalspace [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totally love your porn! errmm... i mean your fic! :D his finger digging down there on her puss and them licking her juice of his digits is just hothothothot and her reaching for her puss is hothot and him licking her is hothothot. hotness and your style of narration, which is funny, is really something. on top of that you're still able to make this fic romantic! well done. oh, it's good to know that they have accustomed themselves to talking while doing it coz that's just the way i like it. *hopeless romantic runs off to hide* keep writing!
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Title: *nosebleed*
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 12:53 CST
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*tlaks through her nose because it still bleeding* This was awesome! I actually blushed and thats pretty hard to do ok! I think you and me are making a competition and see if we can outdo each other! Hehehehehehe! That was great! I love it! *hands cookie and milk*
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Title: Fucking YEAH!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nowshin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mother...fu... WHY MUST YOU BE SO AWESOME????? *SCREAM* I'm going to die after writing this review and you're going to lose a reader. This...was the best. And oh my you outdid yourself with the "nothing" scene! It was WAYYYYYYYYYYYYY better than anything I could have thought about. Yay for Rukia!!!! You. Go and register your writing as a murder weapon, you hear me? *Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh* Take these e-candies and get started on the next chap!Shoo!
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Title: er...
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 03:17 CST
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OMG! ive just been gone for a few days and i already missed two chaps!!!(wipes nosebleed)anyway, nice chap(s).^-^
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chap!!! i really liked it!!! so PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! U R REALLY GREAT!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 08:19 CST
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My ichiban fav writer..you know something.. your story..it's really thrills me as usual..what ever kind of story you write. It's always exciting
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Title: Freaking awesome
Reviewed By: Nowshin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY FUCKING SHIT. *reads every chapter three times and faints* This is one of the best IchiRuki (Experimental Emotions and Gut Instincts are alos my favorite~!) fics I've ever read. SERIOUSLY!!!I practically registered in mediaminer.org just to review your fic.It's just ...wow. It's extremely funny and enjoyable,both Icigo and Rukia are in character and you've done an excellent job making their POV and thoughts so freaking humorous( gotta love the use of the F-word! XD). There is one thing though, before they have sex I think Rukia should confront Ichigo about his stupid-ass statement saying "it was nothing". That is the greatest insult a guy can do to a girl. In the first two chapters, Rukia was pretty depressed because of that and presumed Ichoigo's confession of love was just a trick to get into her pants. Something needs to be done about that, don't you think? ;) Anyway, I love you. *favs and hugs* Keep up the good work! SMUT WINZ!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 18:17 CST
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hi. Just wanted to drop a line and say I'm really glad you're spending the holidays writing satisfying smut XD Whee! I love this story so far, it's funny and crass. It has such a different tone from your other work, and it's nice to see you experiment and play around with Ichigo and Rukia while keeping them in character :)
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Title: Oh yeah!!!
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 14:05 CST
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Sweet Hollows!!! Good girl you did it again!!! I mean I got hot simply by sitting infront of the PC and dont owrry no one is going to throw you and PCs as long as you give us the long waited, slowly tortured next chapter. I guess ım feeling the same sexual frustration that they are feeling. I have the tendecy of getting worked up over your fanfics so I guess its ok as long as you update, like within next hour or so, I will be alright=)
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Title: love love love.
Reviewed By: intercostalspace [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this chapter!!! and i love this line: "I wonder why she's never been asked to be married before… oh well, if someone ever did ask her I'd just kill them." i liked how their doubts were answered -- that first time thing. i hope you do not stop here or perhaps a sequel would be better. coughjealouscoughIchiRukicough
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Title: NOOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 12:23 CST
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you cant leave it there!!!!NO NO NOOOOO! Geez get you fingers moving on that keyboard because I need to read the next chapter!!*tries to rip her hair* God I really need that. you are eviiiiilllll because you cant build such a tension and leave it there, just like that, just like Ichigo left it "there"....Geez, you are the craziest writer and I love you, but you just give me one more chapter, just the next one...just a little bit...Gahhhhhh *grabs a pillow and shreds it into pieces* sexual frustration, I cant help it=/
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Title: nice=NICE!
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 06:57 CST
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well happy holidays too ^-^v ...cant wait for the update!
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