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Title: HA!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 06:53 CST
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Love the POV's, and how they're both thinking, "Hey, if he/she had sex with me... then WHO ELSE have they beem having sex with???" Too funny! Poor Rukia... driving herself nuts with the STD thing, and Ichigo stabbing Renji in the heart, and cutting off the... ahem. :D Great chapter! I screamed when you left that cliff there. Now we'll probably have to wait unitl after the holidays to see what happens, eh? Oh well... okay. :D Have a wonderful Christmas, you rock! ~gg
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Reviewed By: intercostalspace [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 04:58 CST
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thanks for ch 4. you make me want to scream 'give me ch. 5 now!' but of course i have to wait for that. this was a lovely chapter. made me laugh & think that they were both jealous of the other's previous partner which never actually existed (i hope please coz otherwise that would just break my hopelessly-romantic heart). i have to be blunt & say that i am looking forward to a HOT chapter 5, and a clarification from both of them that they are each other's firsts...and then probably another HOT ch 7 and then a HOT ch 8 and then a HOT ch 9 and then -- get the idea? :D
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 01:58 CST
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I like how you show the tension that is there between them:) I especially liked the part with the direct link between the captains and their thoughts. Could you imagine? lol. :)
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 23:23 CST
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I really like this fic! Its was so funny I would get the sexually transmitted disease and that… that would just be bad. I laughed specially hard at this part and Ichigo is in pain *Hahahahahahaha* I love this fic is so naughty and funny great job!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know the whole she is nun thing! I cracked up it was so funny! A hobby other than thinking of Rukia as a freakishly beautiful and pious nun… kneeling at an alter while I crept up behind her and lifted her black clothing… feeling the naked skin of her ass and the wet slickness of her center as I rubbed my hands all along the inside of her legs, she'd whimper and I'd- I cracked up! Please continue I want to see how these two are going to patch things up!
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Title: review for chapter 2 & 3
Reviewed By: intercostalspace [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 07:25 CDT
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chapter 2 was great just like chapter 1, but i was sort of lost reading chapter 3. i thought i am reading some other fic totally not related to this one, that is until i finished 1/4 of it. hope you could update. you mentioned through Ichigo that it has been 1 week since they have last spoken, so hopefully they could talk at least. No problem if they don't patch up things yet, i just hope they would have some sort of exchange! ;D
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 18:04 CDT
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Funny chaper! And they're both thinking this AFTER that incredible night they had together, I'm guessing. It's a delight that you updated this; I thought it was over after the second chatper, so imagine my shock to another update! All I can say is give me more! Laters!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 15:08 CDT
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oh my god you should update and you should update soon or else ım going to die!!!! seriously you keep me on edge and I want to click on that next chapter button eventhough it doesnt exist!!!Grhhhhh
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Title: Wowzers!!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are pumping out the chapters like a locamotive girl!!! This is a good chapter... it gives you more insight into what Ichigo and Rukia are thinking, which is part funny, part angsty. I can just about imagine what the next chapter is going to be like... until next time!! (P.S. is anyone else not getting a notification email when a new chapter is uploaded? I haven't been getting them for a while and I have this story and arthor on my faves list....)
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Title: ei! ^-^
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 02:02 CDT
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very nice...
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Reviewed By: Tidoo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved what you did ! the story and the way you tell, with a part from Rulia POV and an other from Ichigo's, that's just great ! I read your others stories, and I like them all ! And I saw you like france, so, I will continue in French, just to make you practice ^^ J'ai adoré et j'espère que tu en feras plein d'autres. Et j'attends la suite avec impatience en espérant qu'ils finiront par se réconcillier ! So just in case you don't understand me, I hope you make others stories, and you go ahead with this one. And of course, you make them together again after some explanation...
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Title: Kabob
Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U very unique writer. Ur imagination far beyond. This is the first time I see a different style of writing. Bcoz ur story very unique. I feel so funny when Rukia eat kabob. actually japanese like to eat takoyaki but u put kabob instead. very different point of view n I like it. So plz continue coz ur story fill my big appetite. p/s:sorry for my terrible english coz I'm asian ;p
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 19:53 CDT
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shit! another fic from you...Yey lol ^-^v. uhm is this suppose to be a sequel from your other fic?(juice box...i think) no? but? okay.XD well the story is interesting! and i'm intrigued on how Ichigo got to Rukia's pants. oh well i guess its for the coming episodes. uhm about your writing style i'd say its good.(well its all i could say cause im not really a writer) hope youll update ONS soon.^-^ and oh! almost forgot. going to France?...sweeet. uhm Enjoy and have Fun... P.S. sorry for ol the dots my stupid keyboard is kinda broken.
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my! it seems like you just started to a new story which will be as good as the other ones I believe=)so cheers for your new story...and cheers for my new found entertainment
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