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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 14:18 CDT
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yo is the dude jakotsu, plz say it ain't so, but good story, glad that kagome and inuyasha are getting back togather, and that hopefully her break wit hoko will go welll......lol......i know it wont but hey maybe no hard feelings.aww so she can't have ne beautiful children by our sexy hanyou? wat a shame
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 12:40 CDT
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great chapter update... liked it... finally Kagome is coming around... is it safe to guess that Hojo is gay and slept with Jakotsu?... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 22:10 CDT
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I lOve this fic but it causes such mental anguash...hehe...I must be insain....hehe...So have you that about have hojo get it by a train..hu..tempting Isn't it....hehe..ok I'm defienetly insain.....the only way I could attempt to cure it is if you write another chapter....realy soon....hehe.....JK...there is no cure for my insanity....but I would be koo if you update as soon as you can any ways....hehe......I got to see how ya get them back together....wait Hojo can turn out to be guy and goes with the guy from the band of seven that I can't ever spell his name...but ya.....I'm so mean to Hojo...but he desurves it for taking Kagome away form Inuyasha...XD.....Ok up date realy soon....Nyuka
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Title: Frustrated
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 15:30 CDT
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I really love your fanfic!! You have to update soon!! I really hope kagome realizes she needs inuyasha and that they should be together! I dont want them to die. ^^ You're saved in my favorites so i cant wait till you update! Although i have noticed one thing about your style of writing you say 'he asks' or 'she asks' you are not very descriptive. But its ok! I really liked the story. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 13:51 CDT
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P.S. it would be interesting if she did find out that Hojo did turn out to be gay... update soon please...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 13:50 CDT
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great chapter update... Kagome is so stupid though... she wasn't really thinking when she left... she could have all the opportunities if she stayed... anyway hope you update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Brookie07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is an awesome fic , you had a few grammatical and spelling errors, but therwise I am loving it , I have ADD so it takes alot to get my attention , and your story had me on the edge of my seat , it is amazing , please post more soon
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 22:28 CDT
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Ya know he could alway get hit by a train then she wouldn't feel guilty about leaving him....but then again I guess things don't work out like that..... And Sesshoumaru he was koo...he wasn't to agressive and he gave Kagome a job.....I think Sesshoumaru was realy worried that he would loss his little brother and that is why he hird her am I right??...because if she works there she will be forced to see him every day...................come on he'll go to a better place....It could even be accsedent that he fell on to the train tracks...he doesn't have to be tied down to await his doom...Hojo wont know hit him..much less a train....hehe...I was soo right to you had what happend after he woke up and then the time skip....They have to get back together....one because they will die if they don't and two because they were made for each other..... I await you next update....*twich* pashently....who am I kidding I need to read this fic....please update as soon as possible.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the update, it was awesome! please write some more!!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, I'm begging you and i hate begging, please update. This story is great and I need to know what happens to them.
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:48 CDT
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oh mannnn!!! Kagome needs to make up her mind! she knows she needs him and loves him but she's too worried about supporting herself that she's not looking at the bigger picture!!! ughhh! it frustrates me! but it's really good, pplease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:33 CDT
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A time skip is coming up now right...hu......well that was something ya don't see in fruitsbasket...hehe.....So where can she go to where he wont find her...she is officialy his mate now...so now he can't even forget about her....I wander if Kagome reolized that when she did that to him....poor guy...and if she ever came back she would probably believe that he wouldn't want to see her...thats so depressing...Well I hope you update as soon as possible because getting more then one chapter in a day is the best thing ever espeshal when I realy like the story....the funny thing is alot of time I end up reading a story but I don't like how it is turning out but I can stop reading it and its thoughs authors who update regulary...I would have to say this is the first story I truly in joy that has quick updates...that makes me so happy....ssooooooo are you going to have what Inuyasha thinks when he wakes up or are you going to go strate to a time skip and have flash backs of his pain...or maybe your going to do something compleatly different I don't care just as long as you update soon XD....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 17:21 CDT
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great chapter updates... but kinda sad with what Kagome keeps doing to Inuyasha... hope everything works out in the upcoming chapters... don't worry about the story being short or long... it's your decision if you think the story is complete... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 15:40 CDT
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Poor Inuyasha left again...so sad....he kept baiting her...I was afaid he was going to put some kind of mate mark on her with out he consent....I'm glad he didn't because that would screw things up....Why would Koga go over to Inuyashas any way if they hate each other??.... They did admit that they loved each other...how sad that she just left....sigh*.....I hope this doesn't happen because it would be so long befor they see each other but when I read the last sentences I felt like they would not see eachother for a few years...be for they found each other again....I would be romanitic but if a couple Months did that to Inuyasha then a few years would kill him.....some thing came to mind when I was reading this it reminded me of fruitsbasket....How Kagome had know where to go and was taken in by a family that wasn't realy adopting and she descovered a secret about the family...she did all the cooking....then when She had to leave she felt empty inside....but in fruitsbasket they came to take her back and she want to go back and she let her self go back....jut in case you never watched the anime or read the manga......I have a question when I when to my E-mail this after noon it had to new chapters but when I opened them they were the same chapter...weard hu...just thought I would ask.....Ok please up date soon....and as soon as posible....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 07:28 CDT
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AWWWW!!! When are they gonna admit it to each other that they really do love each other? It's getting really interesting ya know. Please update soon.
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