| "When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: Please Update
Reviewed By: BloodRedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is good ^^ i like it alot please update as soon as you can ^^ plz thankies awsome story ^^
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Reviewed By: Okie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg!!!!! write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: priest81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not so crazy about the whole yaoi gay thing between the guys but its still an excellent story it really has caputred the essence of the characters.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: blackbloodedangel On: March 02, 2008 22:12 CST
Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good fic please continue.
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Reviewed By: asm On: February 20, 2008 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I'll summon up some ashes so they don't get suspicious when they don't find a body" So that indicates Naruto was going to tell them he killed Nibi. Like only the ashes were left when he killed the dragon. But then you had Naruto say that Nibi escaped.
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Title: *whistles*
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretend that there are a few more zeros behind those tens. ^_^ Please update soon again, I can't wait to see what unfolds!
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Title: I beg of you
Reviewed By: E.B.R On: February 18, 2008 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright this is now my favorite story on this website. ^_^ Its definatly a new touch on the rest of the NaruSasu stories. Its...(god how do I say this.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 12:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Question! If Sasuke took Naru's mask down he would see the whisker marks on his cheeks that would make him easily recognisable by Sasuke. So why did he just kiss him when he would have reacted some much differently? Or would he reacted so much differently? But still why didn't he have any reaction to whom Naru really was? I would think such a glaringly obvious trait would slap Sasuke upside the head, no matter his state of mind.
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: Kumiko67 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great!!!! I can only imagine how hard can fighting scenes can be. They were awesome really! I love your story here to the end of the galaxy and back, the wait was definetly worth it. :D :D :D :D I can't wait to see how Sasuke reacts when he realises he has naruto under him :D, since his mask is off. I hope naruto doesn't obliviates him or something.
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Title: ON WITH THE STORY
Reviewed By: blckbloodedangel On: February 13, 2008 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on you gotta finish this story. PLEASE?!
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Title: When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge
Reviewed By: mrboo On: February 09, 2008 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story keep it going
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Title: When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge
Reviewed By: mrboo25 On: February 09, 2008 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic please keep going
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Reviewed By: Tell-me-more On: February 07, 2008 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry and write more. I love this story. Its so interesting. Quick questgen... is naruto still wearing the mask? If not how is he hiding the wisker marks? If so why didint sasuke notice the marks when naruto was eating?
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Title: UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: blackbloodedangel On: February 06, 2008 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You so have to UPDATE this story. Ever since I read it i've going back to it none stop to see if you had put any more to the story than you already have. Come on you need to UPDATE!!!!! I'M DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!
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