| "When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: Love it!!!
Reviewed By: Duchesscarml (too lazy to login) On: October 15, 2007 05:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh I love this!! At first I thought you were going to make my InuTaisho a baddy, but I'm happy with what you did. It's nice mix of Naruto and InuYasha without actually being a crossover - heh. Update soon!! I can't wait to see what happens when they realize Naru is Naruto... I've a feeling it isn't going to be pretty. I doubt Naruto would draw it out like he is doing if he knew that they all believe he died. He wouldn't let them keep hurting... especially Sasuke (and maybe Jaraiya). I wonder... will Naruto find out the village believes he's dead - you know, maybe see his grave or memorial (if they built one)- before or after they learn who he is? In other words, will he be prompted to tell them after learning what they believe or will he find out by one of them shouting, crying, and/or hitting him when they find out who he is thinking he staged the whole 'death scene'?? I hope they won't think he would fake something like that; after all he wouldn't have wrote those letters if he wanted them to think he was dead. Well... UPDATE SOON!! I have to know!!! ~Duchess
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Title: UPDATE NOW!!!!
Reviewed By: chii-yuki On: October 13, 2007 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON IF U UPDATED SOMEWHERE ELESE EMAIL ME PLEZ MY EMAIL IS hotgirl499chick@yahoo.com so please this story is really good it'll be a waste to see it left and never updated
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Title: Ch. 1-3
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, this is such a kick tail story! I hope you update soon, i am so in luv w/ it!!! *squeals*
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Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 21:10 EDT
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more more more more more more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: September 24, 2007 06:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
simply awesome. I found this story rather enjoyable and I hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: a friend On: September 21, 2007 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! please!!! your story is excellent, you have to finish writing.
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Truth filled lies On: September 09, 2007 16:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please oh please write more this is really good please update soon
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Reviewed By: SilentSyi On: August 11, 2007 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story so far, you are really good, I haven't read one like this before. I can't wait for the next update!!! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 01:05 EDT
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I'm somewhat torn...I like this story...and I don't. To be honest its the Inuyasha bits that I don't like, I can picture Inuyasha charaters in Naruto, but I really can't picture Naruto smacking around Inu-Taisho, let alone wielding his fang. You seem to be a pretty competent writer, I bet you could have came up with your own character's and weapon. But all in all I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: Starlight-Angel On: August 07, 2007 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad!!! i like da inuyasha and naruto mix xD i didn't noe inutaisho was sooo hott!!!! LOL keep up da good work ima looking forward 2 da next few chapters~
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 16:18 EDT
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Mmmmm... I do like this story a lot! Hope you update relatively soon. Good luck on your other story though! Once you get that one done, you can invest your time into this story then. At least that's my way of thinking, so hurry with the other one? Thanks! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 11:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! It's so cool with all the demons in it! But I'm going crazy! pleaseT-T....in the next chapter have them figure out it's Naruto!!
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 04:31 EDT
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ooo. i hope you write more. i can not wait to find out what happens when they see naruto. he is alive right?
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 12:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it.It's a new take on the whole 'Naruto left' thing.I hope you update soon because this seems to be off to a great start.You seem to not have any pride in this writting peace, but you should.It's very good.Please, try to have fun with it and it'll be alot easier to write.
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Reviewed By: greycat64 On: June 29, 2007 12:40 EDT
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This story is pretty enjoyable. Your spelling and grammar skills are decent. However, the overall tone, based on the prologue and closing comments, seem disrespectful of your own work. I get the impression that you have no pride in your craft. Seriously, you need to do something with your prologue. Clean it up and leave out your I-really-can't-be-bothered attitude. The background seems important to the story. You should make some effort to integrate those details.
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