| "When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge
Reviewed By: mrboo On: February 09, 2008 12:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story keep it going
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Title: When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge
Reviewed By: mrboo25 On: February 09, 2008 12:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic please keep going
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Reviewed By: Tell-me-more On: February 07, 2008 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry and write more. I love this story. Its so interesting. Quick questgen... is naruto still wearing the mask? If not how is he hiding the wisker marks? If so why didint sasuke notice the marks when naruto was eating?
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Title: UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: blackbloodedangel On: February 06, 2008 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You so have to UPDATE this story. Ever since I read it i've going back to it none stop to see if you had put any more to the story than you already have. Come on you need to UPDATE!!!!! I'M DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you fall asleep on your computer. This story is sweet it would be a shame not to continue it.
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Title: OMG :3
Reviewed By: Forget me not [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Holy crap! this fic is fantastic!!! i love your style and you really seem to have captured the essence that is naruto. The whole "atack of the fan girls" part was soo funny! i like the cross of inuyasha! the mention with the sword is a nice touch! and you mentioned (if only ever so slightly) that narutos' seal is gone. Did he merge with the kyubi? is he really a deamon or only half deamon? And how come Tsunade didn't ask him HOW he heald so quickly...oh and what is the dodg deamon up to during all this? are we gonna find is the book that kakashi has (the one he mentions w/ Icha Icha) writen by Jariya? does Jariya even know about this "naru"And lastly is Naru only compared to kakashi? if he is so strong as to defeat deamons wouldn't he be compared more to the three great sanine or even the kages? oh i must know please update soon!!!
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Title: UPDATE NOW!!!!
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 16:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 22:51 EST
Comment/Review:
okey doke! i really like it so far update soon!
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Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 11:45 EST
Comment/Review:
fucking update already
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Reviewed By: shayfangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 22:53 EST
Comment/Review:
Great story! I so want Sasuke to discover who Naruto really is, you know so that he can finally get rid of all the emotional baggage. Personally, I think 'dense' does not do the characters justice, more like completely blind, but since they do believe that poor Naruto is dead it just makes it all the more funny, or should a I say angsty lol
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Reviewed By: Margaret On: December 03, 2007 12:54 EST
Comment/Review:
Great story so far, I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: tell-me-more On: November 16, 2007 18:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. i love the irony in it and every thing. Just wondering... Im probbuly a horrable Inuyasha-fan for not knowing this but... who is that Inu... something or other? I really have no idea. *sobs at own stupidity* Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: November 16, 2007 01:34 EST
Comment/Review:
An interesting development here. A mission beneath a mission huh. Keep up your writing~
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Title: YATTA!
Reviewed By: Kawaiikoneko89*notloggedin* On: November 14, 2007 15:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really ejoyed reading this fanfic but I can't help but notice that it has been a while since you have last updated. I hope you find the time to update soon! =^^= Koneko-chan
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Reviewed By: tora-akki On: November 07, 2007 04:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!! Or at least give us some idea of what is going on. It has been almost two months since your last update, and I am getting worried that you are leaving the story like untouched like so many other authors. Please don't do that, it would be such a waste- of both your talent and my time. I have to know how the story ends, so, as I said before, PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!
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