| "When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: starlight-angel On: April 27, 2009 09:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLI LIKED THIS STORY AND HAVE BEEN CHECKING BACK 2 IT TIME FROM TIME OVER DA LAST YEAR!!!! PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!!!
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Title: Me again
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to reRead your your story. Its so good, Please update soon when you have free time! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Refreshing
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 05:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to reread the story again. I'll be waiting for the updates with baited breath. Hehe. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 00:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... this story is utterly fascinating. Please update soon! I love the way you've portrayed Naruto... its perfect. And the turmoil that they are both enduring is going to make is so much sweeter a victory in the end. I can't wait to read more... please don't keep me waiting too much longer!
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Title: Please Update
Reviewed By: BloodRedMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 20:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
This story is good ^^ i like it alot please update as soon as you can ^^ plz thankies awsome story ^^
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Reviewed By: Okie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 22:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
omg!!!!! write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: priest81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not so crazy about the whole yaoi gay thing between the guys but its still an excellent story it really has caputred the essence of the characters.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: blackbloodedangel On: March 02, 2008 23:12 EST
Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 11:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good fic please continue.
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Reviewed By: asm On: February 20, 2008 04:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I'll summon up some ashes so they don't get suspicious when they don't find a body" So that indicates Naruto was going to tell them he killed Nibi. Like only the ashes were left when he killed the dragon. But then you had Naruto say that Nibi escaped.
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Title: *whistles*
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 23:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretend that there are a few more zeros behind those tens. ^_^ Please update soon again, I can't wait to see what unfolds!
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Title: I beg of you
Reviewed By: E.B.R On: February 18, 2008 14:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright this is now my favorite story on this website. ^_^ Its definatly a new touch on the rest of the NaruSasu stories. Its...(god how do I say this.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 13:40 EST
Comment/Review:
Question! If Sasuke took Naru's mask down he would see the whisker marks on his cheeks that would make him easily recognisable by Sasuke. So why did he just kiss him when he would have reacted some much differently? Or would he reacted so much differently? But still why didn't he have any reaction to whom Naru really was? I would think such a glaringly obvious trait would slap Sasuke upside the head, no matter his state of mind.
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: Kumiko67 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 11:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great!!!! I can only imagine how hard can fighting scenes can be. They were awesome really! I love your story here to the end of the galaxy and back, the wait was definetly worth it. :D :D :D :D I can't wait to see how Sasuke reacts when he realises he has naruto under him :D, since his mask is off. I hope naruto doesn't obliviates him or something.
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Title: ON WITH THE STORY
Reviewed By: blckbloodedangel On: February 13, 2008 17:40 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on you gotta finish this story. PLEASE?!
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