| "When Old Dreams Shatter, New Ones Emerge" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you fall asleep on your computer. This story is sweet it would be a shame not to continue it.
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Title: OMG :3
Reviewed By: Forget me not [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Holy crap! this fic is fantastic!!! i love your style and you really seem to have captured the essence that is naruto. The whole "atack of the fan girls" part was soo funny! i like the cross of inuyasha! the mention with the sword is a nice touch! and you mentioned (if only ever so slightly) that narutos' seal is gone. Did he merge with the kyubi? is he really a deamon or only half deamon? And how come Tsunade didn't ask him HOW he heald so quickly...oh and what is the dodg deamon up to during all this? are we gonna find is the book that kakashi has (the one he mentions w/ Icha Icha) writen by Jariya? does Jariya even know about this "naru"And lastly is Naru only compared to kakashi? if he is so strong as to defeat deamons wouldn't he be compared more to the three great sanine or even the kages? oh i must know please update soon!!!
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Title: UPDATE NOW!!!!
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 16:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 22:51 EST
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okey doke! i really like it so far update soon!
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Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 11:45 EST
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fucking update already
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Reviewed By: shayfangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 22:53 EST
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Great story! I so want Sasuke to discover who Naruto really is, you know so that he can finally get rid of all the emotional baggage. Personally, I think 'dense' does not do the characters justice, more like completely blind, but since they do believe that poor Naruto is dead it just makes it all the more funny, or should a I say angsty lol
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Reviewed By: Margaret On: December 03, 2007 12:54 EST
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Great story so far, I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: tell-me-more On: November 16, 2007 18:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. i love the irony in it and every thing. Just wondering... Im probbuly a horrable Inuyasha-fan for not knowing this but... who is that Inu... something or other? I really have no idea. *sobs at own stupidity* Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: November 16, 2007 01:34 EST
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An interesting development here. A mission beneath a mission huh. Keep up your writing~
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Title: YATTA!
Reviewed By: Kawaiikoneko89*notloggedin* On: November 14, 2007 15:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really ejoyed reading this fanfic but I can't help but notice that it has been a while since you have last updated. I hope you find the time to update soon! =^^= Koneko-chan
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Reviewed By: tora-akki On: November 07, 2007 04:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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PLEASE UPDATE!! Or at least give us some idea of what is going on. It has been almost two months since your last update, and I am getting worried that you are leaving the story like untouched like so many other authors. Please don't do that, it would be such a waste- of both your talent and my time. I have to know how the story ends, so, as I said before, PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!
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Title: Love it!!!
Reviewed By: Duchesscarml (too lazy to login) On: October 15, 2007 05:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh I love this!! At first I thought you were going to make my InuTaisho a baddy, but I'm happy with what you did. It's nice mix of Naruto and InuYasha without actually being a crossover - heh. Update soon!! I can't wait to see what happens when they realize Naru is Naruto... I've a feeling it isn't going to be pretty. I doubt Naruto would draw it out like he is doing if he knew that they all believe he died. He wouldn't let them keep hurting... especially Sasuke (and maybe Jaraiya). I wonder... will Naruto find out the village believes he's dead - you know, maybe see his grave or memorial (if they built one)- before or after they learn who he is? In other words, will he be prompted to tell them after learning what they believe or will he find out by one of them shouting, crying, and/or hitting him when they find out who he is thinking he staged the whole 'death scene'?? I hope they won't think he would fake something like that; after all he wouldn't have wrote those letters if he wanted them to think he was dead. Well... UPDATE SOON!! I have to know!!! ~Duchess
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Title: UPDATE NOW!!!!
Reviewed By: chii-yuki On: October 13, 2007 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON IF U UPDATED SOMEWHERE ELESE EMAIL ME PLEZ MY EMAIL IS hotgirl499chick@yahoo.com so please this story is really good it'll be a waste to see it left and never updated
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Title: Ch. 1-3
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, this is such a kick tail story! I hope you update soon, i am so in luv w/ it!!! *squeals*
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Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 21:10 EDT
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more more more more more more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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