| "Our Lives in the Hurricane Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: January 12, 2011 23:44 EST
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Great updateeeeeeeeeeee! I'm totally sorry for not reading this sooner. I've been so busy and I rarely get on MediaMiner, actually it's been months, it almost feels like I haven't been on it in a year though. XD Have you ever thought in posting on other fanfiction sites? Like Fanfiction.net or Lunaescence.com or Freedom of speech: Fanfiction (fos-ff.com or was it .org? It's 3 am and I don't remember at this moment) but mostly the first two sites? They are quite popular and gather a lot of attention but personally I get on luna everyday since the authors and readers/reviwers are all friendly and helpful. And the stories on there are awesome. Seriously they care about spelling, grammar and they focus on the quality of the story and not the number of reviews they can get. They actually care about the fandom that they write for and they care about writing a believable and realistic stories and origincal characters. So no mary-sue crap, chapspeak, horrible spellings/grammar, out of characterness, and immature behavior. I only suggest that because I honesty believe your stories deserve more love and I feel like maybe posting them on another fanfiction site will bring in new readers who will enjoy this and will be happy to follow along/review it and stick with it until the end. Anyway, love this and again great chapter!! I'm so glad with what went on with Neji and Yasmine. Haha, you had me nearly holding my breath in worry that they may not be together or even be friends anymore because of Neji's action. But yeah, can't wait for the next chapter. I hope life is treating you well! |
Reviewed By: Eau64 On: May 13, 2010 23:44 EDT
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Awesome. Haha I like Jungo, haha he's got that big brute innocent mind when it comes to the simplest and relationship stuff. So yay, pretty happy with the update.
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Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: Nekochi On: April 30, 2010 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read many, many, MANY didi mention MANY fanfiction but your stories by FAR have been the best. The way you write and the swtich of POV keeps the reader in the story and part of it! i love how you add in AU into the story with characters having OOC-ness but still maintain the orignalilty from the series. I stayed up until 4am(6hrs of reading) b/c i couldnt stop reading. Yas/May are very creative yet relatable characters that keeps the story on track and doesnt have me rolling my eyes or saying "wtf is wrong with this story/author" Keep up the good work the story is as they say "F*kn awesome" -Neko- "It's Britany Bitch" *starts dancing*
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: January 16, 2010 00:14 EST
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Awesome update! I'm glad you've gotten back into writing again!
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Reviewed By: M.I.A On: December 01, 2009 19:45 EST
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COOL!
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: November 22, 2009 01:03 EST
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Yay~ Yeah, I don't know how yaoi fans do it write them. I can't stand to read them which is why I avoid it all together. *shivers* Disturbeding stuff. This was great! Really interesting! And that seme quiz thing made me laugh. Only because I remember finding a site that has a quiz that determines the type of seme you are. XD I think I got the Clueless Seme or the Optimistic Seme.
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Reviewed By: We are fighting On: November 10, 2009 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read this but never got to reviewing it. Pretty different and cool to read. How long will this be? Sorry if you mention it already but I'm curious. Will this end completely or will there be a sequel? And do you have any other stories plan?
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Reviewed By: Namika On: September 22, 2009 19:48 EDT
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Interesting story
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: August 21, 2009 02:25 EDT
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Wow....I would say the feeling for this chapter is frustration. Or at least from the reader's point of view. I had a suspicious feeling that Mayu would turn down Sasuke but I kept hoping it wasn't true or that sometime else would happen, that I would have never suspected but meh, drama is drama. That's always interesting to read. So the only question is what exactly was going through her mind to make that decision. Lol, I fear what Tenten plans for Yasmine and operation get Neji's attention is. I have many ideas in what it could be but some stand out more than others as the most reasonable and likely to happen. Though I won't know till the next update. ^-^ I'll be waiting patiently for it. Haha, I think as the chapters go, the more questions start to pop up.
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Reviewed By: M.I.A On: August 08, 2009 17:33 EDT
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Cool!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: July 31, 2009 23:48 EDT
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Yay! I finally get to leave a review just as it was updated. Haha, I always missed the updates and review late but yay! Must be because today was so nicec besides the scatter rain which help cool things down. That was all intersting and Itachi did surprise me in the end with his confrontation with Mayu. Haha, I didn't see him reacting like that. All in all, this was an awesome chapter.
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Reviewed By: M.I.A On: July 14, 2009 01:44 EDT
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Awesome!
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: July 10, 2009 22:00 EDT
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Oh, and that dream that Mayu had was interesting and I like how it was broken down and I wonder what her decision is. And Neji's dream scared me, I was like wtf, so dark and wrong. And I felt total relief to know it was just a nightmare. So excellent job in adding that in and making it like a real thing. I'll be looking forward for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: July 10, 2009 21:57 EDT
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Yay! This is a great birthdad for me! Two chapters for me to read and I did! It was fun and amazing to read. Love it!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 21:23 EDT
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This cheeered up my horrible summer. By the way, awesome tribute to the king of pop within these written word of walls. Or something along those lines. Fav line by far. "Deidara-sama… You thinks you're all that and a bag of chips, but… I'm all that and a bag of skittles, so taste the rainbow, bitch!"
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