| "Our Lives in the Hurricane Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: August 21, 2008 20:55 EDT
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That's cool! It's fun to see the interaction that Yasmine/Yasume has with Tenten. Reading the chapters that have them hanging out makes me supcious that Tenten likes Yasmine more then a friend should. Lol, and I wonder who Neji dated. Interesting parts.
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: August 21, 2008 20:51 EDT
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SWEET! Each chapter keeps getting better and better. Though I'm more interested in what's going on with Mayu. Yasmine/Yasume is an interesting character with the things that happen to her and everything. But for some reason I'm not much focus on her. I guess because I feel that she clashes a bit with Mayu since they are both telling their stories at the same time. Ah, it doesn't matter because the story in whole is awesome.
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: August 21, 2008 20:42 EDT
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Hahah, the action is so cool! I also find the story behind Mayu's family and Itachi and Sasuke all being connected very interesting.
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Reviewed By: Eau64 On: August 21, 2008 20:38 EDT
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Cool! Sai is so funny and cool! XD Keep going with this! I can't wait for the next update!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Eau64 On: August 21, 2008 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooooooo fun to read. I'm not one to read theses type of fics but I only come back to this site to read this one. It's really is different from the last story, with Hinata's one. But it's cool!
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Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 15:28 EDT
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Oh fav qoute? Easy! "Sexy, sexy candy, that is…" -Mayu Ishikari J'ELLO! Been a while huh? Anyway, Nice chappie, once again I was cracking up. The next chapter is propably going to be a bit weird for me. >< But once again waiting for your qenious! ^^ also sorry about not being able to put up the fanart, my scanner is broken.
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Reviewed By: Kiera J On: May 26, 2008 16:08 EDT
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Ello my fello fanfic writer! In the original manga Itachi is suppose to be a spy sent from both the Uchiha and the rest of the village but since Mayu came in that has changed it up a bit. Oh yeah... Itachi dies. It sucks, he was starting to be my fav character. Anyways Itachi was sent out to kill the Uchiha clan from the one of the head council who knew about Itachi's hell of a past. and after Itachi experienced the whole Kyuubi attacking the whole village the trauma of it made him want peace instead of war. And he left Sasuke alive because he couldn't bring himself to kill his own lil' bro. Isn't that sweet? Update ASAP! I wanna know what happends to Sasuke on his journey to finding Mayu's journal. It's probably hilarious... good bye!
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Title: Muffins
Reviewed By: kiwi_mist [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 15:14 EDT
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Does it really take that long to write and awesome fanfic? *sighs* aw well. Plz update soon! I have to found out what happens next! Although Itachi sounds pretty funny in my head when he is in his younger form. I can hardly imagine it but somehow i do. but stiiiiiiiiiiilllllll! UPDATE YA DUMB BITCH --cough cough-- SOON!
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Title: FUCK THE FILLERS!!!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 22:03 EDT
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Sasuke was taken aback. Glow up stick?! How dare that snake call his super, special, awesome sword a 'glow up stick'?! -Now THAT was funny!! Man I hate fillers!! Plz try to update sooner!! It's been a whole month I was about to DIE. *Sighs* anyways, I think Tenten was acting kind of lezbo at the end...yea. It's gonna be scary as hell when they fight over Neji...or when she regains her memory!! SHE'LL KICK NEJI'S ASS!!! So yea, plz update sooner. PS-Am I the only one reviewing now?! HOW RUDE!!!!
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Title: some ideas
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 17:01 EDT
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um...i was just thinking and then it hit me! when they get back from the village, mayu can go visit her house again with sasuke! and then itachi can be there injured. mayu tries to do something, but what does sasuke think of it? what is his reaction to seeing his bro? yea, see???? awesome!
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Title: this chapter was too funnny~~~!!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 17:17 EST
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This demon was... "CUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTAAAA!" I squealed. Yo that was funny as hell!! the other funny thing was when mayu mistook voldemort for orochimaru...HHAHAAAA-cough-AAH!!! anyways, how did hinata meet takeshi?! wait- where the fuck did takeshi come from? But seriously, when they get back to konoha, make something up with sasuke and mayu! i wanna see their relationshop progress...
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Title: hm.
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 20:33 EST
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i got an idea about mayu....if it helps. she could go visit gaara again in suna with sasuke along with her and there could be a love triangle goin' on! OR, when mayu gets back to konoha, she visits her house again and sees itachi! make him injured too. that way you can get somethubg going. ^.^
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Title: hahahahAAAA-cough-HAAA!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 16:43 EST
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"Orochimaru is on the ground... licking himself," Sai answered. That was seriously funny! and when kabuto was singng in the beginning, i was like "is this chick serious?" plz update sooner this time!
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Title: KEWL
Reviewed By: kiwi_mist [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! very creative. and i have one question for you, is mayu "taken" by itachi? hints were sorta put out in the open in the first part of this whole mess. lol. G2G, i wanna make a new fanfic on inu-fic . bye
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Title: aw c'mon!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 13:38 EST
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its been a whole effin month!!! where are you?!
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