| "Too Close for Comfort" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 19:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An sad face :( I really really wanna here more for this one! I like it allot. Keep up the good work. Also if you ever need help reading over and checking for grammatical errors I would be honored to help. mocha1926@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: September 14, 2009 05:42 EDT
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Nice to see you haven't given up on this :) I really dislike it when you get all into a good story and suddenly there's no continuance! So it's great to see you picking this up again. For the chapter: it's very complicated and mysterious, sometimes even making me have to read back some chapters to see what had expired previously but I like that. It's a story with more depth than the average romance, the mind needs satisfying as much as the body ;) Hope to see you update soon and keep up the good work! -X- Xaverri
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Reviewed By: KittyLover856 On: June 23, 2009 16:35 EDT
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wow, i really like your story. i kno u have updated in a while. but i hope by some miracle u do. im eager to see wat happens.
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Reviewed By: InkLock [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 04:08 EST
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im really enjoying your story so far i hope you update soon. Im eager to see were your going with this.
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Title: New Yamcha
Reviewed By: Iceis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 22:50 EDT
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Definitely a diffrent take on Yamcha than I have ever seen. A little OOC, but it drives the point home and gets the story into the place you want it so it works for me. I hate Yamcha anyways so I can take a little bit more reason to be angery at him lol. Excited to see the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta!
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Title: In Character!
Reviewed By: Iceis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE that you have everyone in such an alternate universe but working with the same dialogue they would use otherwise! Im sad because of the big gaps in the chapter updates but Im only on the second chapter so Ill try and draw it out. I suffer the same fate with my fics as well so I don't blame you. Hope you get the inspiration you need to finish!
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Reviewed By: lafemevegeta On: August 31, 2008 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!!!!!!! THANKYOU!!!!!! I have been waiting all year to read about Vegeta and Bulma's interaction. You gave me exactly what I asked for so I'm going to try my luck and ask for at least half a storyline revolved around Bulma and Vegeta. This story has great drama going on. Can't wait to read more. ChiChi has been great so far, I love the front row seat she has in this story. Please update ASAP. Thanks for a great read. Until next time:)
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 16:30 EDT
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Great story. I hope you update soon! I cant wait to see how Vegeta and Bulma will develope their relationship as time goes on and when they are working side by side. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Iamchichi On: August 13, 2008 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I a big time fan of ChiChi,. I am so glad she not head over heel in love with Goku yet …… The is the first fiction I can remember reading where she has no interests in Him at all yet great, let him be the chaser for once. A refreshing change, she so strong I love it.
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Reviewed By: patdav On: August 12, 2008 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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long time coming, thank-you--- that chapter was great like a tall glass of lemonade, after along hot day............ ilove the whole chapter piece by peice...... thereis a mystery here is it not. i wish goku was in it more. loving it
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Reviewed By: not a member On: August 12, 2008 01:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm following up, it's about a year later, and I'm glad to see you've continued; maybe not as far as I was hoping, but you haven't abandoned the fic. I'm sticking with what I said before, this can go very far. I'm hoping that you are going to stay with it until the end...I understand that reality can get in the way, which sucks, but I hope you find time for this. I'd absolutely love to see a nice long chapter filled with lots of interesting twists next, but I know that that is a completely unrealistic dream, lol, as much as I would like to see that happen. Thanks for updating though...I'll be checking back frequently.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was about time! i totally forgot about your fanfic but now i wonder what he has in plan for her?
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Reviewed By: keleos On: May 19, 2008 15:39 EDT
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glad you updated!!!! i'm really curious now ab bulma's interview, hehehe! good job so far!!!!
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Title: so far so good
Reviewed By: lafemevegita On: April 27, 2008 13:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story so far but I expected to get farther than the hand shake between Bulma and Vegeta. If you follow up with Chi Chi's promotion next chapter, please give us at least 3/4 storyline on Vegeta and Bulma. It's what all your fans are waiting for. Please don't let life get in the way of this great work. Update REALLY SOON PLEASE!!!!! Can't wait for the interview. Until next time, Much Love
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Reviewed By: ladyChi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 18:57 EDT
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I like chiChi strong character so far..... I'am a ChiChi fan big time'''' update real soon.
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