| "Miko Malice" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 01:17 CDT
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Hot raspberry jell-o....that's an image. I was glad to see that you updated so quickly! Good luck with the job interview!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 23:43 CDT
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quite descriptive. poor girl's suffering from post traumatic stress. what could kagome's father possibly have against the inuyoukai? then you toss in an antagonistic kikyo in the mix... seems like interesting turns and complications ahead. ~thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i understand that. But the whole Kikyo thing about her getting married to hanyou (cough Inuyasha cough. Lol. Well update soon!! and i'll review the day of the update or i will review. You can count on me!! Mkay??
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 01:11 CDT
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I like it! This fiction is very cute and original, and it grabbed my attention and kept it throughout. I'm a sucker for the Kagome-as-hanyou stories, and this one is excellent and unique. I really hope to see a new chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in the movie 'little big man' the cheyenne indians have the 'contrary'- one who says and does the exact opposite of what they mean... from the series, the manga, the fan fiction... i have come to the conclusion that inuyasha is a 'contrary'. . . is sango youkai or human? ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: inugurl93 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story!!! you should know though, the third and fourth chapters are the same. ---inugurl93
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 08:32 CDT
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You made my day! Update soon!!! *squeeeeeeealz*
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Title: Whoa.
Reviewed By: sunrisegoodbyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. I never read anything like this before. I loved the start of this. I actually like the fact that you made Kagome a hanyou. It's different. But i want her to talk!! So like could you start making her talk in the next 5 chappies??? So the whole cat vs. dog thing seems awesome and whatnot. So update soon!!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 17:38 CDT
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I am gunna have to add you to my favs...this story is awesome so far and someone needs to kick kikyou ass
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 16:48 CDT
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Seems like this is a very interesting start. I don't mind Kagome being a cat hanyou, infact I find it entertaining [with the cat vs. dog]. I'm impressed.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one only has to think of the worst place for her to be and look there... a neko... the worst place is one where there is a whole lot of dogs. . . i like cats and i like the contrast of inu-hanyou/neko-hanyou. ~thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: August 06, 2007 23:05 CDT
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I really want to know what Kagome's mother is doing to find Kagome. If I were her I would have left my good for nothing husband,honestly he better give Kikyo a death sentence, daughter or not. She is too evil to have done that to her sister, she will never make a good leader and a priestess at that.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: August 04, 2007 10:50 CDT
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This looks like it will be another great story from you. The only thing I really didn't care for is making Kagome a stupid neko. Don't take that personaly, I don't like any author making Kagome a neko. I'll still read this story. Please update as soon as you can.
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Title: cactusflower
Reviewed By: Cactusflower [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 20:37 CDT
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I like don't stop I would like to see how this ends. Only one question why a neko? Update when you can no hurry.
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Title: Prologue
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 18:30 CDT
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I didn't bother reading all the description, but it's not like I have all the time in the world. Also, you might like to reconsider the following, "step daughter, and with the crisis of her eldest birth daughter had been missing for over a week." Shouldn't "step daughter" have a hyphen, and you might like to insert a "who" in that sentence or something. You also simply wrote "stepdaughter" later on. Anyway, I don't mind about there not being Kagome or Inuyasha there yet as it was entertaining enough, but what I would like to see, is more - looking forward to it. Mata ne!
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