| "Miko Malice" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 14:13 CST
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awesome update! Love it! Please update soon and have a nice day!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... great update... like it so far... feel bad for kagome... glad that kagome was saved by her mother... kinda annoyed with inuyasha that he didn't even put up a convincing argument with his father... so disappointing... what will all the reactions be... what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kuroikeito On: February 12, 2008 00:20 CST
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Woooowwww. I've been enjoying this fic immensely. In fact, I just finished reading the entire thing straight through, over the course of the past -- checks clock -- 4 hours? 5? I'm not sure. I was supposed to be doing my organic chemistry homework, but this was a lot more fun. Foo, whatever, I'll do it in the morning. I think that this fic is really well written. While you do have some grammatical and typing mistakes, they are very minor and easy to read over. What you're really good at is weaving multiple plot lines into the story. Though the idea of Kagome being a hanyou has been done before, I think you were very creative with how you dealt with it here. I am very much looking forward to the next installment of this story, and am very, very excited to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Obviously the man didn't think it through that well. There he is trapped in a room full of the enemy and the only one he can rely on helping him is Kikyo. Not even his wife or Kagome will help him survive the attack. And since the charm is missing from Kikyo she won't be able to make it appear she knew nothing and was just being a dutiful daughter marrying whom her father told her to for a treaty. After Inuyasha finds out that they are Kagome's sister and father she doesn't stand a chance but the father might if he loses his prejudice and allows the treaty to go through with Kagome as the bride instead of Kikyo.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 18:39 CST
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you should search google and youtube for 'san san kudo' and 'shinto wedding', not only will you get detailed descriptions but you can watch the shinto procession and san san kudo performed. . . so everything is going to happen right down to the wire, huh? i don't handle suspense very well, or trauma, or angst... *skips away to find some crack filled fluff* ~ can't wait for more, ginny
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 07:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow, I love this story! Please update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you have everything building up to a nice climax with all the characters coming together. Both of Kagome's parents, Kagome (of course), Kikyo, Inuyasha, Miroku and Sango, Sesshomaru (and his hair), Inuyasha's parents are present and an army on the way. It looks to be a large brawl is in the making. I am looking forward to see how this is resolved.
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Reviewed By: LiHudson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you've decided not to take a break from this story. I would love for you to finish your other work, but this one is SO CLOSE! Good luck at work, I hope you get some down time!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 05:36 CST
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i'm anxious to see what kagome's mum is going to do once the ofuda is removed and what chaos will ensue. . . i am wondering on the hypocrisy of the human ruler, his disdain for the youkai but his wife and daughter are of youkai blood. it can't all be about cats and dogs, can it? . . . the removal of the spell will enable kagome to help free her mother, defend herself from the other youkai servants and now she can tell her father what horrors that her sister caused her to endure; not good news for kikyo. . . can't wait! ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 03:11 CST
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Ummm, you know I love this story, but you made several little boo-boos in this chapter. Inuyasha's is experiencing his human night, so he shouldn't have claws, or be able to smell Kagome's fears. Kikyou, one would assume would be at least a little surprised to see Inuyasha as a human. And if it is the night of the new moon, Sango can't see the moon set, nor any moonlight. Other than that great chapter, I love that Kagome got the charm off of Kikyou without her knowledge. And was truly surprised that Kikyou would remove the silence spell.
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Title: ChibiRin (offline)
Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:30 CST
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I'm glad that Inuyasha understood that Kagome didn't want to kill him. Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: babeygurl_15@hotmail.com On: February 03, 2008 22:57 CST
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hey this is a really great story can't wait until you update again peace inuluvher151
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, glad kags didn't kill Inuyasha! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(grins) Y'know, I've been following this story from beginning to end, and I gotta say, it is fucking awesome. I mean, seriously. The suspense is crazy as hell, and I just gotta read more.
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Title: Hello again!
Reviewed By: Auraidne_deep [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 13:44 CST
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Update faster, dammit! Fasteeeeeeer!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ You're grammar has been improving, and it was fine to begin with too. Keep going! -.- UPDATE!!!!!
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