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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raito's so crafty and such a great actor. Even in chibi form! XD Great chapter! Almost too much emotional depth! Raito is so emotional! I didn't expect him to start outwardly crying. Though, it seemed.. natural for him to be crushed by rejection. I felt very sad for him. And L! Mean person who didn't believe Raito. Our chibi Raito-kun is very sad over L's rejection of him. Oh, you've perfectly characterized Mello, btw :D And Near, too! Well, I liked this chapter! It didn't seem like a transition chapter--it had tons of emotions! Please write another chapter again soon! I want to read more XDD
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so....angtsy... i love it! it did seem kind of rushed, but us readers really will take anything if it's postponed long enough. anyway, its cool that Raito got to take all those tests and even surpass L. heh, and when you threw in that part where Mello/Near worked together to beat him... well :) i just thought that was plain cute. but what do i know? :P im just a reviewer
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm well this one wasnt bad, we finally got to see what happened to light, and though L kind of broke it off kind of harsh to him anyway) he did it pretty easy, considering the kid has a mind of a late teenager. well, ja ne! that was a good chapter, and i look forward to a new one
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! you updated!! Awesome chapter, too. Yes, it explained a lot of things. Like whether or not Light was really Raito (even though it was kinda obvious before... sometimes authors pull some crazy shit on the plot, you never know!!), and what the hell happened to Raito before he disappeared/died. Man that's a sad way to go. He got raped & killed. But now he's back and ready to save L! Kinda sad he won't save his dad, though. He feels so strongly for L, and L just doens't friggin see it!! L doesn't see that that's really Raito!! ZOMGSH! Please update again soon, I want to know what's happening next!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! Update :) I'm loving this story, and can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: yume3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this story, and am so happy you were able to finally update. Light and L kissing yay, even if it was just a peck. Light is freakin adorable especially when he asked L to kiss him again, omg love. Poor Light being builled by Ito, that jerk. Hope you are able to update soon^^.
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(sorry, my review got cut off.. here's how it was supposed to go) OMGSH FINALLY!! That's so funny that you updated right now, cuz I was just re-reading your first chapter a few days ago (hoping desperately that you'd update XD). Anywho, I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I also love you for updating!! This chapter finally filled me in on what happened to Raito before.. yea. I feel sad that Raito was forced to kill people and everything. But gawsh Light it so friggin adorable XD. The kiss kinda happened awkwardly, but I thought it was CUTE, and I don't blame you for taking it slow (AS LONG AS YOU UPDATE AGAIN SOON). I don't care if a 26-year-old kissed a 5-year-old and it's immoral or whatever, cuz it's so adorable! Plus, Light acts like he's 10 years older than he really is, so that makes it more legit. But then I don't blame L for being freaked out after kissing a little kid, either. BUT IT'S ADORABLE AND I DON'T CARE IF IT'S WRONG OR WHATEVER XPP So please update again soon, I want their relationship to progress somehow, and I want to see "Itou-san" get put in jail and raped by some insane biker dude. Grr. (Don't ask) And I still wanna know how Light came to be as he is. Update and I'll leave another awesome review!! Ack Light's so adorable!
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGSH FINALLY!! That's so funny that you updated right now, cuz I was just re-reading your first chapter a few days ago (hoping desperately that you'd update >_
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Reviewed By: dreamerswaking [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It's really interesting. Do you post anywhere else or just here? I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 22:30 CST
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i wish you would update! light-chan is so cute!
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Reviewed By: yume3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 02:07 CST
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This is really good. Raito and L already almost kissing, how cute. In a werid way of coruse since Raito is only 5 at the moment. The interaction is adorable. Hope you will be able to update soon^^. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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How cute! ; ; please update soon!
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Title: WTF??
Reviewed By: dipilidopa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 09:16 CST
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i am soo stopid, i didnt notice the apiloge! This explains some things.. ... and some not. questions: 1. how Light knew about L? 2. how he knew that its him? 3. whay light was frienfs with this idiout?? light is a genius snub, was he really that lonly? i demand an explaniton to this and flashbacks! (explantion dors not equals to "you see, i stayed his friend even he is an idiot-which i hate, has more god-complex than me and gave me dirty looks because...) all in all i like your fanfic and i hope you will keep on writing it because its very intresting!
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Reviewed By: dipilidopa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story! its so intresting, chibi light is adorable! i hope you will continue (and that I will know that you continued)
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2007 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! NOT BACK TO WAMMY! Let little Light stay there with L and Watari *cries*. I love the story so far! Light's so chibi and adorable and SMART! And every little thing he does is filled with so much mystery and intelligence that I'm seriously going to pull out all of my hair if you don't update again soon and let me know at least a small bit of where Light is from... And Raito's past is slowly revealing itself... I SERIOUSLY want to know more. puh-LEEZ update again soon! I'm seriously hooked! L and Light, ticking attacks, awkward moments.. I love it all~! ^_^
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