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Reviewed By: fireysuccubus666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2009 15:18 CDT
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OMG YAY finally an update!!! wewt keep it coming ive been following this story since it first came out and ill keep reading it faved you and faved the story cant wait for the next chappie
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Title: Awesome!!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really have enjoyed this story and am glad you are still working on it!!! Thank You!!!! I'm now on the edge of my seat wondering what has happened to Rin! Is this a way for Sesshomaru to get her back? Oh I hope so!!! I will be looking forward to your next exciting installment......
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Title: Keep writing
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 14:52 CDT
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I am really enjoying this fanfic. Keep going! Yea
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 17:31 CDT
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yay you finally updatedXD ive had this fic saved on my comp ever since last year when you updated in may...i like the direction that the fic s going=D and that last chapters has been my fav so farXD update soon=D please dont wait until next yearXD
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hmmm...why is everyone else dead and reincarnated except Sess? Kouga was a full demon as well so it shouldn't be just that Inu didn't live that long but a full demon would. I hope this isn't going to turn into a Kag/Sess pairing...(sorry but eww! LOL!) Kagome needs to give Inu a chance...Sango didn't remember until she touched her. Good story.
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Reviewed By: bk On: April 25, 2009 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the great story. This is getting more interesting with each additional chapter. There are so many questions to be answered. The next chapter will be really interesting. Sesshomaru seems to know what is going on, how much will he tell Kagome. I cannot wait for the next chapter to be released I hope it will be soon.
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 18:45 CDT
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hey wait...if ayame is in this now...will naruku show up as well?
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanficXD its so good=D are you going to come out with a new chapter soon? please hurryXP
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 20:32 CDT
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this is a great story, but there's one problem and that is 12 year old girls are not in high school.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 19:39 CDT
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oh no, kouga's 'my woman nonsense coming up eh? sounds like fun, too bad they didn't awaken ayame's memories first and then had them bump into each other accidentally on purpose... fix them up before kouga's memories return. happy stuff girls' night out... i prefer sci-fi, anime and comedy so i had to choose my friends wisely or cultivate their tastes. . . a trick to using the right pronoun, example: "she wanted Kagome to have hope in the love that InuYasha and her had." if you are listing two or more people and need to use the correct pronoun, read your sentence without the other names ex: "she wanted Kagome to have hope in the love that her had." and you will see that you should have used the pronoun 'she'. . . fun chapter, excited about reading more! ~ pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 23:54 CDT
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sorry i hadn't read or reviewed in all this time; stuff happened, people died. . . the story seems to be progressing rather nicely and i like the the little remark about yash having learned math before even taking it (he had to have been paying attention when kagome was studying). if miroku and sango had been married in the previous life he will be very impossible when he gets those memories back. . . now that hopefully everything has settled down i plan to read and review regularly... by the way when i started reading the last chapter i couldn't help but feel i had read it already. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: Repeated Chapter
Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 19:55 CST
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First, great story and I can't wait to see how everything turns out. Second, Chapter 8 is actually Chapter 7 posted a second time. Here's hoping that this was just a mistake you can fix soon, because I realy want to read more and soon.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a Great Story!!! I love the way Kagome keeps meeting up with her old friends. The scene with her seeing Inuyasha for the first time again was priceless. Please update this soon...I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG its getting better keep going
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 00:24 CDT
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Good to see IY again, and know that he's linking up to the past, even if in dreams. Will help when he does remember. Glad Sango and K found each other and S remembered, so that K isn't so alone anymore. Problems....a few spelling errors, but the main thing is the tense. Going from her/he to I/me is confusing and jarring. One or the other is best, smooths things out. Anyway, glad to see this again, it's a fun story.
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