| "Underneath it All" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: cnewtson On: August 22, 2011 00:48 EDT
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This is a very cute idea, but you have some tense switching and some pov switching. I do like the characterization. |
Reviewed By: SunsetGuardian On: July 27, 2010 16:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read, and I've read an awful lot of them. I know pushing people to write more doesn't usually do anything because I also write fanfics, but I just have to say it: Please write more. I can't wait to read more of this story.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 20:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's been awhile, but well worth the wait! It was nice to see Roy open up a little about his past with Ed. Great chapter- B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 14:01 EDT
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I just know that Ed's going to get one of those for his birthday from Roy ^_~
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Title: Well Done!
Reviewed By: Sunjeara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must just be the right time of year...I've had TWO of my absolute favs updated this week...and this is one of them. You have the honor of being the last remaining FMA fic I have bookmarked, and as one of MY recent reviewers told me, it was just too good to get rid of even though it's incomplete You haven't lost any momentum, picked right up where we left off. I can't pinpoint what it is about YOUR Ed and Roy that continues to captivate me, maybe it's that Roy can't seem to help himself, and that despite unbelievable alchemical power, Ed is just Ed. All I know is I've read a lot of FMA and I can't tell you how excited I am that you've come back to us. : ) Very sincerely, Jada
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Reviewed By: LissaRiddle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 06:09 EDT
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This is a very good story so if you would reply soon it would be much appreciated.
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Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: February 12, 2008 01:05 EST
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I'm back, and i just LOVED the newest chapters!!! LOVE! please write more, i still agree with what i said last time, but thats because its such an AMAZING story!! "may the force be with you," Flaming jello
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Title: YES! yes yes and yes
Reviewed By: TypoDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 18:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!! I've been waiting for this forever to come out xD'. I'm such a geek. I'm SO Happy with this chapter X___X I profess, i ask for the ever meme'd "Moar" Good lord xD I love your writing. Mmmm Jean/Ed x_X *drool* xD which I hope to see more of!
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Title: @_@
Reviewed By: TypoDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 11:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm with the other people on this. This story needs to be continued, and as soon as my girlfriend gets on, she'll be spammed with this link
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Title: OMG! o.O
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello On: October 05, 2007 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK! that might have just been the most fantastic story ever.... all i have to say is..please write more?o.O this was a very nice fanfic, i must say though, that i expected a confrontation between Roy and Jean...i think that was his name...i feel bad now that i cant remember if im thinking of the right person but you know who i mean(Ed's love interest)... but it all lead towards that and you end it. i was severely let down.. loved the twist at the end of chapter 3 though. please write more, i love your writing style! ^.^ ok, i haven't really written anything... but when i do, i have a fanfiction account so if you make a new chapter, attempt to tell me, i dont really get on much though. i would love to read more! good luck and best wishes, Flaming Jello
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like the start of an interesting story. With just one chapter to go by I don't really have much to say, so I hope you update soon. I do like how the I like that Ed's hair is longer... It must be almost past his ass if it's that long in a braid. ....mmmm ...That's it not however even close to being the best thing about this story, so good job! :D
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