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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm i reakcon Koga is behind this... anyways its really good!! poor Inuyasha T-T i wanna hug him!!!! i hope Kagome is going to be alright
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... not much is clear yet... the only thing that's clear is that kagome got kidnapped... and that inuyasha and her family are looking for her... hope in the coming chapters there'll be some answers to the questions (who the kidnappers are? was it a deliberate or random kidnapping?)... what did inuyasha hear... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 18:25 CST
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Aaaaack.......you can't leave us hanging like this! Get back here and give us more, more I say. Darn it, who is this that has her, how does IY know them, and why did they take her? Better yet, how badly are they gonna hurt when our hanyou get hold of them? Come back here and tell us!
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Reviewed By: arielle On: October 22, 2007 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this fic is awesome! i love please do get better and write some more! keep up the good work and i can't wait to hear from you again. hopefully soon. love it! thanks for doing a good job! arielle
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... so where are they taking kagome anyways... who are the kidnappers... why did they take kagome... do the kidnappers have a boss... how will inuyasha find her if he's not familiar with kagome's era... inuyasha should get some help... what will happen now... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 19:19 CDT
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Good chapter. Not much action, but moves us right along. Will there be a helpful clue in the message/background? What/how will IY react to the message/Kagome's hurt? Should be intense! A/b the kidnappers, I like the idea that they're part of something big, with a hidden agenda. Perhaps tied to the Shikon no Tama legend? But then, a random kidnapping really emphasizes the 'unsafe-ness' of Kagome's time. That someone can be hurt/taken for no other reason than being in the wrong place at the wrong time, so maybe that fits into the theme better. Either way, it's sure to be a great story!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooo i know thw answer!!!! and i can inmage seeing Inuyasha sniffing around on the ground with people walking around lol
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... too bad they didn't stay home and hear the phone ring... glad that kagome is at least leaving a trail eventhough she doesn't know where she is... just wondering though about the kidnappers... who are they... why take kagome... was it specifically her they were to kidnap or just because she was there kinda thing... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 18:01 CDT
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Aha, it's supposed to be: The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog Amazing what a little google will do! Very good puzzle, keep'em coming.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 17:58 CDT
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Good chapter. Glad to see K still fighting and strong. About the sentence, it uses almost all the letters of the alphabet except s. Was it supposed to be in there somewhere?
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! INUYASHA DIDNT EVEN HEARD THE PHONE RINGING!!! WHAT KIND OF A DOG IS HE!?!?!?!?!?! awww that killed me like hell.... and what the numbers arent on anymore?? damnn... and i shall read your others!! and HAHAHAHA i didnt even noticed that Souta and Gramps arent there... oops lol
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... so kagome's mom would want inuyasha to see if he can smell kagome's scent from where she was last seen... too bad they didn't hear the phone ringing... hope they find kagome though... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 11:01 CDT
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Nice update. I hope you don't give in to writers block. It seems like there is still an easy flow to the story. It seems like Kagome's mom will now tell Inuyasha about everything and Inuyasha will want to help. Kagome's mom will have to keep Inu away from the cops since he has no identity.... blah blah blah... oh and I see nothing special about the number except that it is a nine didgit number containing all digits(0-9) except 6... It's probably not that simple though
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
errrr what is the numbers for?? anyways hmmmm writers block T-T NOOOOO!!! you cant lol anyways GOOD luck with it
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... wonder how inuyasha will be able to help find kagome... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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