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| "Rebel Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Exactly outstanding nothing more to say
Reviewed By: Rasin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 08:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well now this was certainly fun took me like an hour or so to read the whole thing but i enjoyed it although i did find somethings that seemed mean to me especialy when kari and davis were jumped and thrown in the closet but i understand it was to help them. That was some spectacular writing keep it up btw you did have some typos i noticed to well in there but it doesn't matter i'm just glad you wrote a wonderful story for us to enjoy KEEP IT UP!
| Title: OUTSTANDING!
Reviewed By: Gabriel769 aka to lazy to sign in On: September 25, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, for starters, you've done it again! A great DaiKari fic in the making. I love how you used Mikey Simon's catchphrase, It was priceless! Anyway, this was extremely enjoyable; and lastly, two things; 1) If you're going to have T.K. and Davis fight, please give the TaKari out there the big middle finger by letting Davis severely kick T.K.'s ass! And 2) As soon as you read this, if you have any plot summaries to give, or spoilers about your Kappa Mikey fic you said you're working on please email me my email is shanlaughlin@yahoo.com I'd love to hear what you've got so far. I've already updated sleepless in tokyo I'm on chapter two. Anyway, keep up the good work.
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