| "Sakura's Party" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: July 22, 2008 21:43 CDT
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rofl good chapter and sasuke is like simon except hes more of a jerk lol anyway good chapter cant wait for part 2
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Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny!! Poor Naruto (refering when he goes to the corner) *hugs him* Why does he smell like daisies?
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 14:38 CDT
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Great chap. I was laughing like maniacally the whole time. And I know what Hinata should sing. She should sing *Poses dramatically*.............................................................. ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ................a song!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 16 is an excellent edition to your awseome fanfic. And you portray the charachter's personality's perfectly, it's like when I read this Masashi Kishimoto wrote it himself. And another thing your still making careless little spelling mistakes. But don't worry the story is more than good enough for people to look the other way.
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 17:02 CDT
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Sorry didn't mean to say that twice also one more thing DWEAD MWOOSE!!!
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 17:00 CDT
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Y-you said you'd have the next chapter by now. You can't keep me waiting like this. *Crys anime tears* Pwease updat swoon!
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 17:00 CDT
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Y-you said you'd have the next chapter by now. You can't keep me waiting like this. *Crys anime tears* Pwease updat swoon!
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Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I hope you got more. P.S.:I will update as soon as possible....when my labtop is fixed. I am sorry for delaying so long. HOpe your not mad but I am happy you like the story.
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a cool chapter! I loved it when Neji was like "I know I'm unbelievable handsome, but stop staring we don't have all day." That was so funny. Anyways, I updated my story and I hope u review for it. Thanks and update soon!!
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Title: KOOL
Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! Poor Ino and Kiba are gonna run out of money! *healing Naruto's brain* Sheesh if he looses any more brain cells he'll have an IQ lower than a box of rocks
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahahahahahaahahahahahaaha! Oh and there's something written here. Great chapter Update soon. Elmo knows where you live! Dead moose!
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Title: LOL!!! :)
Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!! SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING IN A WHILE, LOL. BUT THIS WAS AWSOME!! ^_~
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Title: NUUU
Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CLIFF HANGERS ARE EEEVIL!!! RAWR!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is just freakin awseome. I actually got this account just to tell you how much liked it. Don't stop!! But just so you know you did make alot of spelling mistakes. Not on the big words like byakugan I mean little words like how in one of your chapters you spelled "done" doen. Next time proofread before you post something OK.
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was really funny! I loved it when Naruto was like "Don't get your panties in a bunch grandma." to Kiba. That was funny. And with Mr. Woofums. Great chapter and Update soon!! I should have my next chapter up soon!
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