| "Reminiscence" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: PRINCESS_P [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2010 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your writing is very good. You should really continue this story! im looking forward to that lemon!! lol
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Reviewed By: kalisaj On: July 03, 2008 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definetly think you should continue this story. It's just something about your writing style that captivates me and makes me want to read more. Keep it coming, I find this story very interesting.
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes, do continue. I too would like to know more about this mystery dent. ;)
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 02:40 CDT
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Oh! Please do continue! I reeeeaally want to know about the dent! Nice prologue, it shows lots of potential!
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Reviewed By: sakuya tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
X...x! I know it's supposed to be a precious moment from the past, but really, why does it have to have some form of sexual stuff mentioned? I'm not saying it's wrong, but, you pervert! Can't you think of something else when you're in the shower? lol. You should know who I am at this point, hopefully. Anyway, nice prologue! Xx~! Please make this story longer, and don't forget to include a trunkX(older)pan moment.(Seriously or I'm gonna post a masturbation poem I found the other day in the review!) ^_________^ HAPPY HALLOWEEN! Pay more attention to capitalization.
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Reviewed By: sesshou_lover On: October 18, 2007 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should definitely keep writing this. It's s really good start. And what is better is that you start after Trunks's birth, which most of the fanfiction writers don't do.
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Reviewed By: Neafiir [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'd really like to read some more! Some nice descriptions as well! I'd definately read more! Good luck writing!
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Reviewed By: laredith On: October 10, 2007 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Should you continue? Uhhhh....... YES!!!! I like how this fic started. I like where it is going. I like it! I want smut! The only thing I'd caution is watch your tenses. Writing in the present tense is tricky business. I like your style so far though. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: ihavnonikname On: October 08, 2007 20:46 CDT
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Tsk tsk tsk...first fanfic and it's already a LEMON!!! lolx. not bad missy, not bad at all. The tv thing cracked me up!!
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Title: kinda kool
Reviewed By: koinu =] On: October 08, 2007 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think u kno who i am frm da name. ;D this is a serious review dis time ok. it was pretty good (not lying). i dont think bulma would b scared of da dark tho lol. haha made me laugh wen u put da tv thing in there. soo yeaa.. CANT WAIT FOR UR NEXT UPDATE! (i can always jus bug u about it so i get to read it first lol) ..man there goes da rest of my dignity =/
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Reviewed By: NJNlolo On: October 06, 2007 16:24 CDT
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Keep going, that opening was very good.
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Reviewed By: madhatter6768 On: October 06, 2007 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTT THIS WAS AWESOME KEEP WRITING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I WONDER WHY VEGETA MADE THAT DENT?? WAS HE JEALOUS OF SOMETHING OR COULD IT BE SOMETHING MORE???
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Title: AWSOME!
Reviewed By: luvyoubraandgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no u shouldnt stop! it's great! continue!
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