| "Nothing is as simple as it looks" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuamante81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2012 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is well written which is more than I say for a lot of stories. I think the only point of OOC that I can really see is the relationship between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. It's been a REALLY long time since you've updated this story. If you've finished it on another website, please let me know. If not, please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Bamfin On: November 02, 2009 13:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I wanna say I'm sorry for your loss. One of my uncles died so ur not alone. But man this story is fuckin amazing!!! The reason I gave u a 9 for the orginality/creativity instead of a 10 like everything else is because of the whole jewel thing but u still managed to make it unique and ur own so I really liked that and I just have to say this also ur grammar rocked!!;) I hate when I'm reading a great story or it has potential to be great but the grammar and spelling sucked, so u were on point with that!! :) well like I said ur story is perfect and I hope u will be putting out anothe chapter soon!!! ;)
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Title: Nothing is as simple as it looks
Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I jope you finish your story I would love to read some more it is very good
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really liking the story thus far ^^ Hope you continue writing 'cause I'd like to read more and find out what happens
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea another Chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! I cant wait to see what happens next!!! Please, please, please update soon!!!
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Title: Nothing is simple as it looks
Reviewed By: Stream0ftears On: February 14, 2008 23:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have a question, when InuYasha had no idea who Kage was, couldn't InuYasha tell by Souta's scent since InuYasha is a Hanyou? Or did I miss it where you explained that particular part? May I add that can you please take a break from saying, "at least thats how he/she puts it." - anything related to that. I see it multiple times in every chapter and I find it rather annoying. Just being honest. Other than that, it's a great story!
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 18:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Do you know how long I've been waiting for you to update!? A long time! But i'm glad you updated just update quicker next time. Ok? Good we understand each other. Anyways, you misspelled a few words but otherwise you improved splendidly in your writing, which is a very good thing. Thanking you in advance. Ciao.
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Reviewed By: Sov(OnSkoolComputer) On: February 13, 2008 19:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I just re-read it during class (finished what we had to do and I wanted to go onto the internet... I'm not doing any thing THAT bad... (just "waiting downloads" in the skools eyes.) I hope you get out new chapters quicker... I actually re-read the whole story because I only Slightly remember it from when I first read it in October... Kouga is SOOOO annoying (so you have gotten that mark right) and InuYasha and all of his aliases are GREAT... (utterly hot....) I feel like there are people reading over my shoulder (and I look and they aren't there) so I'm going off now. -Sovereignty, Killing internet downloads at school, its not like I am paying for it.. the school is!!!!! (mu ha ha ha ha)
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Title: Way cool!!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 17:11 EST
Comment/Review:
Soooo wicked... Write more soon!!! HOw come I didn't find it sooner?? Oh well I've found it now!!! ^-^ Love Draca
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Reviewed By: I'm Inulover1253 On: February 13, 2008 08:14 EST
Comment/Review:
Keep going I love it. Oh yea i forgot my password so im not logged in so I am Inulover1253 so yea don't worry i haven't left you. Great story keep going
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey where have you been i haven't heard from you in a while. Please im begging you to update
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 03:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far and I don't think you are moving too fast. It seems like it was meant to be. I do hope Souta makes it or Kagome will be heartbroken. Actually I am kind of hoping that Sesshomaru and Kagome get together in this one. That would be neat and also introduce a complication or two to your story. Oh and I also think you should leave Inuyasha's and Kohaku's hair like it is. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 17:40 EST
Comment/Review:
OMG! That story is good you have to write more.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 16:16 EST
Comment/Review:
i like this story. some suggestions... do you have an outline or an idea as to where you want to take this story? if you're just making it up as you go carry around a notebook to write your ideas and thoughts, then as you look them over make an outline (animators and film directors use a story board) to organize your ideas and scene ideas into some logical order. . . what is your goal for the story, the characters the ending... it doesn't have to be set in stone but it can be a basis to work toward. . . do you have someone to bounce ideas off of? do you have someone to proofread or beta read what you write? if you don't and you can't find someone to do that i can offer to do it for you, it will free up the time it takes you to do it yourself. it would also give you someone else's perspective. if you want my e-mail is: ginduf[at]gmail[dot]com . . . write me and we'll discuss things, although i won't beta lemons. ~ ciao, ginny
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