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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 23:22 PDT
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I just thought of it. In some ways, Kurt is also torturing her like the doctors her, although unintentionally. Whenever he eats, poor Sam has to smell the food while she's starving. I think that's one of the worst forms of torture. (I love food too much.) Another great chapter. Once again, there's a glimmer of hope that cheers me up. At the same time, I continue to feel so bad for Sam and her family. Ahhh....thanks again for another chapter! Please continue posting! =^.^= Have a great weekend as well!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 22:08 PDT
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At this point, Sam would eat anything… except dog food. Poor thing, when she gets out, they'll make her eat only gruel at first because her stomache wouldn't be able to handle anything more solid than that. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:02 PDT
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Awesome chapter! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work!! ^_^
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Title: cries.
Reviewed By: zorioko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 20:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh!! whose aura was that? grr. stupid weekend.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YAY new chapter! but it just makes me want MORE!! I'm dieing to see what happens next!
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Title: great chapter.
Reviewed By: zorioko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for her to talk to him. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Beauty2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 15:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your whole "Purity" universe, its exceptionally portrayed. Excellent job ^^
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Title: Kurt
Reviewed By: inugurl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 13:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know Kurt is related to Miroku
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Reviewed By: BlkbltVette [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 13:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, Sue, you're killing me here. If Sam had only said half-human instead of half-youkai, it might have given Kurt a heart attack, which at this point, I wouldn't mind seeing. He needs a shock (or two) to realize what he's doing. Another great chapter, though. I didn't use to like the super-angsty stories, but you've converted me.
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 13:10 PDT
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Don't get me wrong, this story is good so far, but are you going to put more dialogue or action into it soon? it just seems a little slow and like there isn't much happening in each chapter. I'm still curious as to whether or not Sam will be locked up the entire story. anyhoosers, please update soon! -jessie6491
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 12:41 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 10:36 PDT
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Great new chapter. He FINALLY told him, "Hey, I'm NOT A DOG, so I don't eat dog food." Maybe he'll eventually ask what she's half of....and then she'll tell him HUMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: brownie31 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story is very good. The details of feelings and motivations of the characters are very well done. Kurt is one angry character and for good reason as it seems. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please, please, update soon. I can't wait to see where this is going next! Will she get out? How will she get out? I have my theories but I can never be too sure what's going to happen. This author always leaves me surprised and satisfied with the way she writes. Good Work!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! Finally some progress, now he can look it up and get some information, he can find out Sam is half human. I'm so happy, just when I thought this chapter was going to be a tear jerker again, we have some positive developments. hahah
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 06:26 PDT
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Aweeee. Kawaiiiii...he thinks her laugh is a pleasant sound...we'll that's right go ahead and shock his system...she a Hanyou..half demon. Meaning half something else as well..o what's that half human? We'll i'll be!!! There are humans that would procreate with a demon a monster?! Lol just a lil sarcasm there but I'm sure u get the point..can't wait to read more...ur phenomenal.
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