| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] |
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 06:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh! Her human night is coming again! Please tell me that Sam won't try to kill herself. I cried for the whole second half of the chapter. The piano and Sam being so sad. Man, I really need a P9 chapter...then I won't have to worry about being as sad as Sam right now.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 03:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurt's got a few things to learn(few??? Try a lot!) he is pretty arrogant isn't he, he hasn't bothered to go and see it what he believes is right or not, and then if he is faced that he is wrong he tries to deny it...
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 01:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO VERY SAD for everyone, Human night coming up, Kurt on the brink of realization- now I can hardly wait!!!!
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 20:36 PDT
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Wowzer! What a strong gal. A "true" hunter...hmmmm...that's deep. It was nice seeing Charity + Ben. Can't wait for more! Thanks once again! =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 16:54 PDT
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Part killer, part psycologist, hey, that's life! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 08:55 PDT
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Like the little interlude with Ben and Charity... LOVE Sam's new resolution to help Kurt. C'mon, girl! You can do it!
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Reviewed By: asgard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 08:26 PDT
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Poor Kurt. So conflicted and confused. His thoughts and the flashbacks make it so easy to see why he believes the way he does, yet his actions towards Sam show there is still compassion and goodness under the layers of pain. The conversation between Sam and her youkai voice was certainly enlightening. It was really great seeing the family dynamic as they cope with despair, while trying to keep hope alive. Wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 21:56 PDT
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i still cant believe they cut her open!!!! but im glad he's calling sami a her now, that means progress! lol i hope he opens up to her! keep 'em coming!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 20:23 PDT
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oh sam! that poor girl! i hope she's not getting in too deep with this new project! but i am glad that kurt is finally conflicted! too bad it took a view of her uterus. :( damn.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 20:03 PDT
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OMG ... That's all I got. I loved the chapter and I'm too hyper for anything else right now. Please Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...Charity and Ben. I knew you wouldn't give up on those two. They are just too cute. And Sami, she already knows that Kurt's her mate. She knows she has to make him see. I really hope she decides to really talk to him, without all the vague answers. I think, when he finds out how serious she is, that he'll listen. He might want proof, but Sam can provide that. Great chapter! I hope I open my e-mail to find one in the morning. They make my day!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 19:58 PDT
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Great chapter!! Keep it up!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 19:50 PDT
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Oh, so we find out why she's staying now and not trying to escape. Hmm...I hope Ryo and Griffin find the old man!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 14:58 PDT
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I'd really like to see those two guys get what's coming to them! "Did you get the memo?" Yeah, and I'd like to shove it up their asses too!!
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Reviewed By: Kristen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 12:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not sure if I've ever reviewed your stories, but I had to tell you I think your entire Purity series is brilliant. This story is the most gripping to me and I think you're doing a great job of building the suspense. Kurt saw his mother, father and sister killed by youkai. Griffin saw his mother, father and sister killed by humans. I think Griffin could tell Kurt that revenge will not be as satisfying as he might think. Great series and great story.
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