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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 20:44 PDT
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I cried like a baby during this chapter! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 20:03 PDT
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It's finally clicked, that 'Demons are people too'... Kinda. What would be great, is if he let the barriers that he placed up 'fail' and he goes off and becomes a hunter like Sam. He has the skills for it. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: dusparr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far the best story that I have read in a long, long time. Each of your stories thus far have been grand reads, but in my opinion this one is the best so far. This chapter almost brought me to tears. **Bows in reverence to the greatest author of them all**
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:49 PDT
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You've brought tears to my eyes. This was the best chapter thus far and I can't wait for the next
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:46 PDT
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Aww...you've done it again, Sue! I would have cried more but I didn't want my dad to look at me like I was crazy. I knew that it was the same night as Ryo and Kich's birthday, so Sam didn't really surprise me when she got tears in her eyes. However, she kinda did when she started talking about her family; then again, she probably couldn't really help it either!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful and so heartbreaking, I wait with baited breath for the next chapter. "Damn, she the baby."
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Title: WOW...!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word kept popping into my mind while reading this chapter: WOW! It was so intense that I HAD to write to you to let you know how amazing this was!! The pure raw emotions experienced by everyone were transfered by your words and felt as if I was there, feeling each and every one of them!! I have no words to express how truly grateful I am for your amazing gift!! Your writing is something that I look forward every day and I cherish so very much! This began so dark and is becoming somethig deep and full of so many things that make my heart feel like it's riding a rollercoaster! You really are amazing!! I can hardly wait to read what happens next!! Thank you again for sharing your writing with us!! You bring so much joy to others I feel so in debt to you!!
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Title: O...
Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 16:56 PDT
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O.o O...snap... I absolutely LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!! Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: asgard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 16:50 PDT
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Wow. Just one conversation and now Sam knows what happened to make Kurt the way he is and Kurt is questioning everything he thought he knew and believed his whole life. Great chapter.
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Title: Chapter 29... **heavy sigh**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, my suspicions were made real...okay, Harlan really IS trying to "superior breeding machine" on us. Yes, my face DID fall on the floor! And the Kich breakdown...took 2 years off my life, Sue...LITERALLY had to go blow my nose! On a lighter note, OMG, Kurt! He called her flat chested...I LMFAO, really, I did. Looks like Kurt's a little sensitive about his age...ahh, male ego at it's worst. Tee hee. So this chapter was angst, comedy, and hope...LOVED it!
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Title: Getting there! Whoo, chapter 28! What can I say?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 15:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These lines SCREAM priceless: "Seriously . . . you don't have a girlfriend, do you?" He stared her for a moment, violet eyes oddly bright, and he shrugged. "Of course I do. Ten of them. They're all mute with gargantuan breasts, and they love me and want to bear my children." (Can we say Miroku?) **STILL chuckling off that** But, oooh, when she told him she was a hunter...I just KNEW he was gonna blow up. Too much to chew on, I'd imagine... **le sigh** OMG, I learned a new fact that'll forever make me look at seafood differently, now... **gets a bucket** And I love the teasing...love handles...funny. (See, I'm catching up! So, Have mercy, Sue...don't make 'em blame me! ROFL!)
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG the first time I'm happy to be crying like a baby. MY heart is melting, poor kurt, poor Sam. Yay for a newspaper. I want to read more!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 14:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh crap...I'm all tears and snot! That was just...wow! I can't believe that Kurt never thought of her having a family of her own. And the whole 'I'm not a baby' thing really did me in. And poor Gunnar. I was wondering who was going to say something. It just had to be sensible Gunnar. Please tell me happy stuff is going to come soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 14:39 PDT
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Awesome couple of chapters!! Keep up the fantastic work and update soon please!! ^_^
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Title: ch.30
Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 14:07 PDT
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;) Ok, so I've loggin (Bwahahaha)! But I'm more for the forum :p What's got to me in this chapter is the links to Miroku's past. The earings are the first, the nightmare where the surrondings are kind of softer than rock brings to mind Mont Hakurei(sp?) where Naraku transform last in the anime or even in the last episodes inside the rock demon. So is he a descendant or reincarnation??? hummm
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