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Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are my god. Write another.
~Estuans interius intervehementi~
-One Winged Angel, Sephiroth |
Reviewed By: dude On: July 04, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was too long. i wish i could have sex |
Reviewed By: Oh come on! On: June 24, 2003 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did you REALLY have to kill brock? he was cool. =( Anyhow, it was quite good. Unfortunately, you've probably forever destroyed my perception of misty, i'll never be able to look at her the same way again. i'll keep seeing the psycho one. |
Reviewed By: Lady Oak On: June 23, 2003 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad!! God Misty is a bitch sometimes. I don't think she'd do something THAT rash but then again you never know.
Good job! This is well written so don't let flames get to you. |
Reviewed By: Busty McPhersill [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 12:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is what had to be done! Face it!! look at every other fic , its all preatty boring then you get this, BOOMPF, Misty attacks!! finaly! something awsome. When's the sequil? ITS GOT TO BE DONE!! (how about revenge of misty? like she breaks out if prison and trys to claim revenge on ash... kina a hybrid of all of the other good ideas above...) anyways, this story = PROPA BO' !! and who cares if Misty "would never do that"!! all red heads are f**king nutters!! I should know!!! |
Reviewed By: hteraj25@yahoo.com On: June 18, 2003 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a bit demented but perfectly sensible. Seeing as how I've had dreams like that..... anyways! Two things 1) Write a sequel and 2) What the heck happened to pikachu? I mean he just sorta dissapeared on us. oh well, continue writing ang long live YOU! |
Reviewed By: YamiNeko On: April 24, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw, man!! this was soo good to read! Ive never heard of anything like it! I always knew that Misty girl was a lil bit psychotic... but then again, aren't we all?? AAHAHAHAAAHAHAHHAHHHAAAA!! eheh, please excuse my randomness. i just finished ALL of my college finals and packing... but great story! |
Reviewed By: Shadow Prince On: April 07, 2003 12:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
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misty couldn't do that, she has her near blind love that keeps her close to Ash while her pride just borders her on not telling him flat out and only dropping super low-key hints that no-one could pick up on as being more than good friends |
Reviewed By: Sailor Rei Star On: April 02, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I wrote for the title, DANG!!! I would have never thought of that story in a million years. I think that is one of the funniest stories ever writen. It was halarious(sp?)! Keep up the good work. I agree; write a sequil. Please!! -_* |
Reviewed By: DragonballZZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel soooo sorry for Ash and Brock ::sniff:: |
Reviewed By: The_Fallen_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! it had me and my friend rollin', it's the funniest thing that we've read since Black Flowers! Yee-haw!!
PS You should've had Brock wake up and rape Misty and then Ash... then kill them both!!! Dun! Dun! Dun!!! |
Reviewed By: The_Fallen_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story! it had me and my friend rollin', it's the funniest thing that we've read since Black Flowers! Yee-haw!! |
Reviewed By: Koneko Tenshi Ecchi On: December 30, 2002 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. very good fan fic!!! i LOVED it. GOD you are GOOD. i watched pokemon for a year or two, but WOW. so DEEP!!! |
Reviewed By: Melvin On: December 27, 2002 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor brock. now he'll never get a chance to get laid.
brock should have survived.
he represents the horny guy in all of us.
i do think that misty would do that to ash though.
jesse would also do the same thing to james if she got the chance. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: December 20, 2002 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very sad (emotionally) fanfic here. I really hope Ash recovers soon. I know this may sound weird, but I have an idea for a sequel to this, if you would like to write it.
Here it is: The other girls (The Sensational Sisters, Erika, Sabrina, Whitney, Giselle {From Pokemon Tech}, Casey, Officer Jenny, Nurse Joy, and Jasmine) go over to Ash's house. They have heard on what happend to him. They all love him (like Misty did), but would never even think of raping Ash like Misty did. They go over to comfort him, which helps him a little. They stay with him for a few days, never leaving his side and comforting him. He is still very scared and pained (and I wouldn't blame him). They are very sorry for Ash... and really angry towards Misty!! They all wished that they could have protected Ash from her. When Officer Jenny knows on where Misty is, she and the other girls (including Ash's mom) go over to the insane asylum. When they find and see Misty, they go into a rage!! They all take their turns on her, beating her bad! After they all had a turn on her, they leave her bloodied and bruised. Then, they return to Ash, to love and protect him for as long as possible.
Well, that is it. The ending is up to you. I hope you take this into considerastion, seriously. Well, gotta go. Keep it up! |
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