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Title: ash ketchum
Reviewed By: thu On: December 03, 2004 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear ash ketchum how are u do you hate team rocket tied you up i have pics for you so you to see do you like pikachu i love you i miss you i like you do you love misty do you love jessie rocket love thu
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Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it! I'm glad Misty got arrested though. Could you write a sequel where Ash meets May and falls in love with her but Misty comes back and tries to kill May? Thank you!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: yomofo On: March 10, 2004 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehe that was hilarious you rule!
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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: Blue1 On: February 08, 2004 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Who cares if Misty, "wouldn't do that", or, "she cares about Ash" . I was great how she pulverized that bastard Ash and totally demolished that stupid pervert Brock. Next time, be descriptive.
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Reviewed By: kagomehaspower52 On: January 19, 2004 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting a little wired but good. One question, what happened to pikachu? she just was gone. and i think u should have put more detail in the rape seen, i would have enjoyed that
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Reviewed By: Angry Mafioso On: January 05, 2004 05:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to write a sequle were Ash finally leaves on his journey met's that May and a new guy, but Misty comes back for whats owed to her.
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Reviewed By: 97 On: January 05, 2004 05:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I all ways knew misty was capable of that but shit she fucked Ash and Brock up,man. It was a great combination of horror, aqnd comedy only because as kids we, most not were I come from, never thought that could happen to them. Ash become 1/8 males in this country.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell hath no fury TILL a woman was scorned. I thought you did a masterful job, with such dark thems. Ash got wooped pretty easy buy misty, If i was Brock I would did what Clint Eastwood did in Blood Work shot her in the arm with a .357 Magnum Revolver. And force her to show me where he was. You gotta countiue the story let Ash get some Restatution.
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Reviewed By: ssodangoatama On: December 30, 2003 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good. A little scary though.... not for english dub viewers. I like your style of writing and the way you present the details. Keep up the good work, but next time, try not to kill Brock, kay? *brock fangirl...*
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Balamb roast On: December 07, 2003 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although you didn't go into a descriptive rape scene, it was evident that Misty wanted Ash, and wanted him now. I think Brock getting clobbered complimented Misty's fury and made the story even more interesting then it had previously been.
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Title: odd
Reviewed By: kurama lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 14:38 CST
Comment/Review:
it was a very odd fanfic, but well-written. I liked it, except for the whole killing brock part. this was the first darkfic that i've read, and it was very impressive.
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Reviewed By: sdfsdfsdf On: July 29, 2003 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So what if Brock's dead? To hell with him and Ash. Besides, this is a Darkfic.This is a fanFICTION, meaning the author may manipulate the characters to his/her liking. HAHAHA-Brock and that little prick Ash is dead. I am so sadistic!
HAHAHHA*_* |
Reviewed By: The Red Witch On: July 28, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved the story. this is the first fics that i've read when misty rapes ash.it was different.keep on writing story's. |
Reviewed By: Red On: July 10, 2003 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was pretty good for a fic. but the raping about ash and misty was gross. Good thought! brock dead... misty jail... ash loser... |
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