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| "Digital Moon GX: The Joining of Heroes" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: Good work!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon On: April 20, 2008 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, there! It's me, again! I'm sending you another! Well, I've seen the final result and it is pretty good, but I think that you accidently made my 'corrections' to the spelling and grammar mistakes that I made earlier back to being 'mistakes' because I've noticed some of the spelling and grammer mistakes that I corrected are gone in the final 'print out'. Anyway, it is another good chapter and I'm glad to help out with it! I'll start work on ideas that you gave for Chapter 3 as soon as I can! I hope that we can get it done as soon as possible! Later and best wishes!
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!!! Well, I'm quite glad you finally updated, I've been looking for this for months!!!! Great job, I really must say it's an excellent way to combine all these, with a uniqu twist that's all your own (that is, it's different from Gallantmon and my own and everyone else's crossovers). Great job! I hope you update soon!
| Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah wow!!! That was an excellent start!!!! I hope you do really well and I'll be here along the way if you need any help!!! Thanks for reviewing my story, so now I'm returning the favor and it looks like I'll enjoy this story quite a bit! See ya next Time! Drachegirl14
| Title: It is a good start!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon On: October 17, 2007 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's me, Gallantmon of the Hazard! Well, I've read the chapter that I helped you with and since I've seen the previewed and reworked it, it is a good chapter! However, this is your idea and you did well for the first time! However, I'm confused about the 'bold' and itatic' problem myself. Anyway, it is still an enjoyable chapter! Well, anyway, maybe you should do what inu-yusukekaiba102 said and did what we did? Have the non-brainwashed heroes and heroines embrace the darkness. Out of curiousity: Are you? By the way, don't have Jun brainwashed by Sartorius and SOL? I prefer free to kick SOL ass. I think it is time for the elder Motomiya to get some 'slack' as street slang calls. What do you say? Can't wait for more! Later and best wishes!
| Reviewed By: inu-yusukekaiba102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 23:31 CDT
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Will there be any embracing the darkness?
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