| "Digital Moon GX: The Joining of Heroes" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: Retard
Reviewed By: Kinghy On: June 24, 2009 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fucking retarded story. The characters are extreme Mary-Sues and have way too many resources. Fact of the matter, there are too many characters to keep track of, you fucking retard. This story is an abomination and should be taken off the site immediately. The Darkness group have too strong of a power base and you are totally destabilizing the SOL, bastard.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great New Chapters
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Reviewed By: laidler123 On: October 12, 2008 23:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
if kai gets hilary which girl will hook up with tyson?
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Title: Another good chapter!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 05:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I really don't have much to say, but good chapter! We still have that small spacing problem, but I'm sure we will get the crack of it sooner or later! Sorry that I took awhile to review, I've been busy. Well, I hope to hear from you soon! I'm waiting for the newest stuff and you and Guardian have for me. Contact me when you want my help! Later and best wishes!
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Title: A really nice reading ^^
Reviewed By: A Digimon Fan On: June 30, 2008 23:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well this time was two chapters for the price of one, nice from you man :) Again I congratulate you for how you have kept Patamon and TK so active, I even liked the bonding between Patamon and Veemon, agreeing on things or Veemon laughing with Patamon when Patamon said that of "Look who is calling the kettle black." Really, that sure are good points for you, keep up that peace having all the charactes balanced and active, that's how is done ^^
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm one of the Authors so of course I think it's flawless. This is one of the best stories that I have ever Co-wrote. I love it.
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Title: Uh... that ain't right...
Reviewed By: TheFellow3J [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 13:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm at chapter 2. That guy fighting Knave can't special summon Buster Blader like a ritual without a card, or something. The instructor cheated!
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 06:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
As usual Crossoverlover, pure magic. Flawlessly done and I'm excited to see more soon!! Anything else, like the new project you guys are working on, give me a holler. ^^
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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, what's up?! It's me, again! I've gotten back to after I re-read the chapter and I have to say that it is another good chapter! The spacing problems are barely even there this time! Spelling and grammar work out very good, so, I think that we really got this down! I like what you and Guardian did as well and you made sure that it flows with the chapter! Can't wait to work with you more! If you need any help, just give me a buzz! Later and best wishes!
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Title: Actually a congratulations
Reviewed By: A Digimon Fan On: June 11, 2008 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I have to admit one thing, this has to be the first Daikari fic with Davis overpowered where I see TK getting fully back to action after being possesed and remaining as good friend with Kari and even Davis, heck you even put Gatomon, Patamon and Veemon really in character and even kept Patamon and Gatomon's teaming up when they are Nefertimon and Pegasusmon, I never saw that on other fics with this kind of crossovers and Davis getting lots of power, TK usually is dumped to the boton having one to another participation but not that active as you did it here, let alone Patamon, he barely gets mentioned but you managed to balance the Davis as king with not leaving the others so out of the action leaving Davis to do all the work, that's big kudos for you man :)
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Title: forgot something
Reviewed By: A Digimon Fan On: June 02, 2008 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
just a question when did Davis learned to use the spirit gun? o.O I think I missed something because still on chapter 4 it was Magnamon the one who did all the fighting o.O Also I should have figured that Gallantmon was helping you with the writing, the battle descriptions were give away, mostly the card duels. But I really want to know why on this green earth you and Gallantmon, mostly Gallantmon always have to give Davis powers from other animes? I barely recognize the real Davis from the series with all those add-ons he has, also why always TK has to be put corrupted as well just to get Davis rescue him and make TK have a Ken like complex later about the evil things he did, Gallantmon did that several times and after TK got returned to the good side he literally got pushed to the bottom like if he wasn't important, Patamon got lucky enough to not be corrupted save times when he didn't got much option other than obey TK due to his loyality to his partner. About Patamon where is him here by the way? I mean I doubt Patamon will let TK get captured just like that, I don't even know why you put Veemon, Gatomon and that other digimon digivolved to their champion forms (I think the third one was a Coronamon) they didn't even lifted a finger anyways the superpowered humans are doing all the work o.O Also about what Gallantmon said about Kari's concern about TK knowing that she and Davis are dating I didn't saw any concern from her, mostly when on chapter 5 she told Davis that she and TK already told each other they love each other as brother and sister, also don't come now with a concerned Kari, first she used TK to get Davis jealous and now she feels worried about TK's reaction? if you ask me that sounded kinda hypocrite from her, she shouldn't have used TK for that to begin with, but is a good thing that TK will not be mad at them, TK is not like that, he only wants Kari's happiness.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man!!! This story just gets better and better!!! I love it!!!! Please update soon.
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