| "Digital Moon GX: The Joining of Heroes" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: sirlucario [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm one of the Authors so of course I think it's flawless. This is one of the best stories that I have ever Co-wrote. I love it.
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Title: Uh... that ain't right...
Reviewed By: TheFellow3J [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 13:40 CDT
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I'm at chapter 2. That guy fighting Knave can't special summon Buster Blader like a ritual without a card, or something. The instructor cheated!
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 06:10 CDT
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As usual Crossoverlover, pure magic. Flawlessly done and I'm excited to see more soon!! Anything else, like the new project you guys are working on, give me a holler. ^^
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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, what's up?! It's me, again! I've gotten back to after I re-read the chapter and I have to say that it is another good chapter! The spacing problems are barely even there this time! Spelling and grammar work out very good, so, I think that we really got this down! I like what you and Guardian did as well and you made sure that it flows with the chapter! Can't wait to work with you more! If you need any help, just give me a buzz! Later and best wishes!
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Title: Actually a congratulations
Reviewed By: A Digimon Fan On: June 11, 2008 18:42 CDT
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Well, I have to admit one thing, this has to be the first Daikari fic with Davis overpowered where I see TK getting fully back to action after being possesed and remaining as good friend with Kari and even Davis, heck you even put Gatomon, Patamon and Veemon really in character and even kept Patamon and Gatomon's teaming up when they are Nefertimon and Pegasusmon, I never saw that on other fics with this kind of crossovers and Davis getting lots of power, TK usually is dumped to the boton having one to another participation but not that active as you did it here, let alone Patamon, he barely gets mentioned but you managed to balance the Davis as king with not leaving the others so out of the action leaving Davis to do all the work, that's big kudos for you man :)
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Title: forgot something
Reviewed By: A Digimon Fan On: June 02, 2008 13:34 CDT
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just a question when did Davis learned to use the spirit gun? o.O I think I missed something because still on chapter 4 it was Magnamon the one who did all the fighting o.O Also I should have figured that Gallantmon was helping you with the writing, the battle descriptions were give away, mostly the card duels. But I really want to know why on this green earth you and Gallantmon, mostly Gallantmon always have to give Davis powers from other animes? I barely recognize the real Davis from the series with all those add-ons he has, also why always TK has to be put corrupted as well just to get Davis rescue him and make TK have a Ken like complex later about the evil things he did, Gallantmon did that several times and after TK got returned to the good side he literally got pushed to the bottom like if he wasn't important, Patamon got lucky enough to not be corrupted save times when he didn't got much option other than obey TK due to his loyality to his partner. About Patamon where is him here by the way? I mean I doubt Patamon will let TK get captured just like that, I don't even know why you put Veemon, Gatomon and that other digimon digivolved to their champion forms (I think the third one was a Coronamon) they didn't even lifted a finger anyways the superpowered humans are doing all the work o.O Also about what Gallantmon said about Kari's concern about TK knowing that she and Davis are dating I didn't saw any concern from her, mostly when on chapter 5 she told Davis that she and TK already told each other they love each other as brother and sister, also don't come now with a concerned Kari, first she used TK to get Davis jealous and now she feels worried about TK's reaction? if you ask me that sounded kinda hypocrite from her, she shouldn't have used TK for that to begin with, but is a good thing that TK will not be mad at them, TK is not like that, he only wants Kari's happiness.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 10:44 CDT
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Man!!! This story just gets better and better!!! I love it!!!! Please update soon.
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Title: Another good chapter
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's me! I've looked over the chapter and I think that it came out quite good. We're still having problems with that grouping situation, but I think that we will figure it out sooner or later. Anyway, I think that we should take care of that 'Kari concern' with TK knowing about the truth of Kari's feelings for Davis, TK isn't mad at Davis and Kari for that, and the three of them staying good friends in Chapter 7. Is that all right with you? Well, anyway, another good chapter and I hope there are plenty more to come. I'll starting working on Chapter 7 as soon as I can. Later and best wishes!
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Title: WTF?!
Reviewed By: A Takari fan On: June 02, 2008 00:00 CDT
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Um, I've read horrible fics before (especially from Mykan the so called king of Daikari and Gallantmon of the Hazard) but this takes the cake, TK Would never bow to the phony king Davis you have in this fic I rather see Davis knocked off his throne and TK take his place
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: A Digimon Fan On: June 01, 2008 23:36 CDT
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the last two chapters were pretty decent I have to admit it though I think it was kinda kind of selfish from Kari to use TK just to get Davis jealous, what if TK would have ended having feelings for her? she didn't thought on that? Also there is something I find hard to believe and is this part on chapter 6: "And if you are 'sleeping together' just makes sure to use protection or birth-control pills." You have to be kidding me, what kind of parents are that fine with allow their 15 years old daughter have sex, even if it is with her boyfriend? what happened with the overprotective parents? heck Tai was more overprotective than them on the series o.O You sure should check carefully what you write, even if it is fiction, that really didn't had much sense if you ask me ^^;
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Title: Good update!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 05:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I've read over the chapter and I have to say that it is another pretty good chapter. You are still leaving a few grammar mistakes that corrected, but it isn't too bad. The spacing problem is somewhat less than the last chapter and everything seems quite good! Well, I hoping to see what ideas that you have for TK and I'll work on Chapter 6 when I have free time. Later and best wishes!
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 20:51 CDT
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Well, I think you've done a fantastic job. It was really good, seriously. ^^ I think you should update again so I can keep reading lol.
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