| "The Paladin of Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: jaust-like-green-waith-elive-poweraigers-man-saires waith-the-dd-wow
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: May 07, 2008 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah-bervo-this-rally-like-green-waith-elive-poweraigers-minsaires-only-wait h-the-dd-iam-won-oover
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Title: this-remainds-of-kimposslibe-epsd-badboy
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: April 29, 2008 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah this-remainds-me-of-saliormoon-epsd-whaer-reini-becomes-waicklady-also-kimp sslibe-epsd-whaer-ron-bcome-vallin
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Reviewed By: Rasin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 04:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Well done mykan as i expected you wrote a fantastic story i waited for a while to see the rest of the chapters and i was never dissapointed for one bit congrats on the well done story!
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Reviewed By: Rasin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 05:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh so sorry i meant Keep it up srry bout that typo
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Rasin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 04:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story and of course your other fanfics on this series mykan. you do a great job with it KEE IT UP!
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Reviewed By: E.S. Reuben On: October 28, 2007 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the new idea you put into Daisuke for what he is doing. Along with how the story is going on right, it does have the proper suspense to keep it going. Only that maybe I should ask about the scubamon right now. Why exactly do they have possession of the two treasures if those items' power is immense in the plot? If you recall, the king that rules over the scubamon is Dagomon, and if the scubamon has Daisuke undercontrol right now, why hasn't their "king" appeared yet? Also, just for some background information, do remember that these "scubamon" is actually "Divermons" without their equipment. Even then, the appearence as Scubamon is only a disguise as you recall from episode 13 that they eventually turned to those black humanoid things taht retreated to the dark ocean when Angewomon threatened them.
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Reviewed By: Soliderboy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool something new and easy to read.I give it a 10.
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