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| "That's the Way Love Goes" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: DivaG On: December 06, 2008 10:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, I hope things get better for you soon and believe me, I know how life gets though sometimes. Anyway, great chapter, although I wanted to strangle him at the end of the chapter. Seriously, what did he expected? After all he was trying to kill her! Damn Chihuahua! But I think that he really changed: after all, the old Sesshoumaru would have never send Rin away, no matter what happened. He is, even at this point, letting his emotions control his actions. I hope he comes to terms with his feelings soon and explains to her the reason of his doubts so they can work it out. Until next chapter and don´t worry about the time, your story is worth the waiting. Good lucky.
| Reviewed By: Waterunleashed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 09:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, the whole Sesshy losing his memory has been done before but I love how you have developed his character and their relationship. I hope you continue this story, I can't wait to see what happens next. Will he have more dreams? What will he be like when she comes back? Keep up the great work. Ja ne
| Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 18:35 EDT
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Hey there! I thought the update was great, so any part of possibly letting me down you should get out of your head. Will Inuyasha ever tell Kagome that he wanted to marry her? I understand that if you snooze you loose, but I think that she should at least know. Oh well that was my rant. Keep up the very good work!
| Reviewed By: DivaG On: September 16, 2008 12:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, long time no see! Anyway, great update. Now he has his memories back, and I think it´s great the way he fights his formerly coldness to not loose all the things he´s gained since he lost his memories and started to show more of his feelings. It´s nice the way he admits that he loved Kagura too, even if it´s only for himself, and the way he wants to keep his love for Kagome. It´s obvious that now he gives a lot more importance to love than before because of the way he accepted the relationship between Rin and Kohaku based mainly in love. Anyway great story and I look forward for the next chapter. DivaG
| Reviewed By: DivaG On: September 16, 2008 12:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, long time no see! Anyway, great update. Now he has his memories back, and I think it´s great the way he fights his formerly coldness to not loose all the things he´s gained since he lost his memories and started to show more of his feelings. It´s nice the way he admits that he loved Kagura too, even if it´s only for himself, and the way he wants to keep his love for Kagome. It´s obvious that now he gives a lot more importance to love than before because of the way he accepted the relationship between Rin and Kohaku based mainly in love. Anyway great story and I look forward for the next chapter. DivaG
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
| Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 23:48 EDT
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this story was great I have enjoyed every word and I can't wait to read more of it soon I hope but no hurry
| Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 21:52 EDT
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Awww, I loved their little spat - Kagome's shock at hearing Sessh actually apologize and then the way he stopped her from returning the apology ^_^ So I thought after the, er, cannon ending (trying not to be too spoilery =D) I wouldn't be sad for Inuyasha anymore... and then she released his beads. And my heart broke for him all over!! But it was still very poignant and made the moments with her and Sessh even sweeter! Miroku cracks me up - I loved his comment at the end!
| Reviewed By: DivaG On: June 12, 2008 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, nice update. Yeah, it´s a pity that ASS is now closed, but I would find your story in another site where you post it, even if I had to personaly e-mail to you to find out. This story is very intriguing. I can´t wait to see how Sesshoumaru will come to terms with his new found feelings once the memories of his prejudices against humans and his brother return. After all, now he has a taste of how he and his life would be a lot easier and happier if the circunstances that made him so hatefull were different. Of course, assuming that there were reasons that made him that way. I only hope that the loving nature of Kagome and the knowledge of her love for him weight positively in his inner battle against his prejudices, for I think that, deep inside, he is unwilling to give up everything he shared with her. I agree with Kagome when she says that he speaking about himself in the third person makes him seem very distant. For me, it´s downright weird, since here in Brazil the manga was not translated that way: here, he refers to himself more like "I, Sesshoumaru...", instead of "This Sesshoumaru...". I think it sounds somewhat foolish. Keep up with this good story and don´t worry if you need to take a break sometimes. after all, it´s a necessity for all of us. Till next time. DivaG.
| Title: Beautiful, Heartwarming
Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to add this story to my fav list. I love this Sesshoumaru. I know you plan to change him when he regains his memory. Just don't, please don't make him forget everything that happened while he had amnesia. If he turns away from Kagome in the mistaken belief that she and his feelings for her are a weakness, I want him to constantly be haunted by his memories and thoughts of her. I want him to suffer even more than I know she will. Also, I don't think it will be so easy for him to sever his relationship with her because their auras and blood are bound together. I guess in a way they're mates without realizing it. Unless I'm totally wrong. If I am, then what did you mean by them experiencing a tingling shock when she tasted his blood and the feeling of something pulling at her to go back to him while she was in her era. What would complicate things even more would be for her to be pregnant. I hope you plan to include that. I like a pregnant Kagome. It's been over 2 months since your last update. I'm anxious for more.
| Title: 1-6 ^_^
Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 10:56 EDT
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Well, I was completley hooked from the first chapter and proceeded to devour the rest! I laughed out loud at so many parts - Jaken's initial reaction to him protecting Kagome - Kagome waking up in his arm and immediately slapping him - and her confusion when he actually calls her Kagome!! Their first kiss was lovely and sexy and this is the understatement of the century: "if someone like the Taiyoukai of the Western Lands kisses you when you don't expect it - even if there is someone else you hold close to your heart - you generally respond positively." Yes. And Yes. Her frustrated scream after he left her wanting more was hilarious, poor sexually frustrated Kagome, lol. Their eventual outdoor interlude was lovely as well - the shared sensations when she tasted his blood was about the sexiest thing ever! Overall, I love the plot of the story. Sesshomaru is done perfectly - I know from experience that writing a character in a situation where they are somewhat ooc and still keeping them in character is extremely difficult - and personally I think you've done it wonderfully. I like that Kagome did go through a lengthy dilemma over being with Sessh because of her relationship with Inuyasha. But I found it believable that after so long of Inu not making a move she would be eager to respond to someone who shows her such open affection. [and is dead sexy, lol] I can't decide if she's actually in love with him, in lust or something deeper happened when she healed him and their powers combined. She certainly thinks she's in love with him, but I'm waiting to see how it turns out ^_^
| Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: March 29, 2008 01:08 EDT
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Thank you for the great update. Rin becoming a woman and Inuyasha crying. I like the fact there is no more sneaking around about being a 'couple' and that Rin seems so excited by it. Update soon please!
| Reviewed By: DivaG On: March 26, 2008 11:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, it seems I´m having troubles to review on AAS lately; I wrote twice and it seems it didin´t work so I´m reviewing here too. I really like you manage to keep all the characters true to the manga. Another thing I like about your stry ia the fact that you don´t make inuyasha a villain to justify the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Inuyasha is gruff, brash, often dense but funny, sweet and caring. He relly cares for Kagome and it´s obvious that he would not take well the fact that she now loves his brother. I have the feeling that he will not give up on Kagome so easily. Also, I can really see Kagome telling everyone the truth abou her feelings, for she is someone that listen to and follows her heart and she could not live in lies. I think that´s the motive that made her give Sesshoumaru a chance to explain why he left her alone in the first place and made her choose to go with him. It´s a good thing too, because while he slowly reverts back to the "Lord of the West", she gets a chance to better understand and know his true personality, letting her fears and insecurities fade away. After all, he is not that bad; he risked his own life to bring Rin back from hell. It´s important that she is very open with him, telling him the truth about the facts that brought them together, her feelings and her worries regarding his recovery that he will abandon her. It ca be very important for them to remain together after his complete recover. Anyway, great work and till next chapter. DivaG
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great new chapter! That really could have gone better with Inuyasha and telling him and the others about Sesshoumaru... hopefully there will be a way to get things sorted out and out in the open without any bloodshed. I feel so terrible for Inuyasha. The only way he could ever accept this whole thing is if he knows about the amnesia and all, but even then he may have a lot of trouble seeing how the news was so brutally delivered. I get the feeling that things aren't going to be pretty when the two groups meet again. I forgot... did Kagome bring a biology book? lol that could save her an embarrassing talk with Sess.
| Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 00:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update when you can thank you
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