| "Temptation Waits" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amy On: July 02, 2002 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That Chapter Was Awsome! Right more. The good thing about your story is i don't have to wait a few weeks for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 10:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the lemon I just wonder what is going to happen next when they wake up?? |
Reviewed By: cherry On: July 01, 2002 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god! I soo enjoy your fic. Its soo cool! Its rockin'! I also loved the idea of barney, its good that vegeta burned the tape>Die barney! Die! Oh sorry, got carried away!Newayz, great job!! |
Reviewed By: smitten_kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 14:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
i liked this chapter. can't wait for the lemon.
hey, but what happened to the elf? I liked the elf :-) |
Reviewed By: Amy On: July 01, 2002 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic! I hope Vegeta Dpsen't die he's such a hottie! Right More!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 07:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best one yet love it |
Reviewed By: Jena On: June 30, 2002 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic! I am so glade Vegeta broke the barney tapes and tv! I hate barney. Right more please! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 15:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
keep writin you rock!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it coming I love this fic |
Reviewed By: Jena On: June 29, 2002 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic you should right more! And don't worry the last line was'ent lame at all. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah yeah more please |
Reviewed By: J.A. On: June 28, 2002 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fic pleases right more efor i loose my sane. |
Reviewed By: Sam On: June 28, 2002 16:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you used Barney and Friends against Vegeta. I hope you write more. |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 13:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA! that was great! I hope that you will keep this one up. Ja !
Life Death Anime inbetween |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 04:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow torcher him some more lol play Barny I hate that thing just as much lol |
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