| "Temptation Waits" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: My face hurts from Laughing
Reviewed By: PrettyLintu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2011 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never laughed so hard at a fic as I did at the thought of Vegeta's button-pushing fetish! Really different from your other stuff, but I enjoyed it all the same :) |
Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Lashae On: April 04, 2009 06:39 EDT
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omg..i cracked up a million times with barney thing..that was so hilarious and very original..great comedy:D
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Reviewed By: Trunks_Wifie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 01:29 EST
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hey the title to your first chp sucks and so do you for calling it that. Idiot!!!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished this story, brilliant, pissed myself laughing, i would love to see this story made into a manga
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 12:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the first few chapters, my god what are you on?, i couldn't stop laughing, you really have a knack for writing please do some more
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Title: aww...
Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 24, 2004 11:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the funniest fic! Oh my God! It was so creative, I've never read an idea quite like this. I almost split my sides laughing when Vegeta went into heat. The pick up lines were pure genius. I want a sequel! I want a sequel! Please write a sequel for me? PLEEEASE??
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahahaha. Great stuff. Vegeta was so lame in this fic but it made it fabulous. I love it. Really i can't stop laughing except to go awwww. This is my new favorite fic. Tehehehehe. Vegeta +Magic Mushrooms= laughter for the whole family. You have the highest of my praises.
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Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good and funny fic! I loved it! I found Lucas funny but a little creepy, you know, I think i'd be a little freaked that I continually saw a good looking elf everywhere I went...hehehehe...but yea...I loved it!
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Reviewed By: bise B On: April 26, 2003 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! THAT WAS GREAT!! haha! i found lucas hilarious! that was so awsome! i loved every minute of it. i couldt stop reading it until i finished..haha. keep writing some more stories. i love B/V fics..i think they rock! but i like the ones where they get together. they are the best. so yea you did an awsome job writing this. keep up the great work! see ya |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 11, 2003 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious! PLease write more like that! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 13:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great fic. I loved the ending, the song was perfect for it. The marriage ceremony was really neat too. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dani Yuy On: December 30, 2002 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me! thanks for the link to the finished story! By the way, I think that you should write a sequal, I don't have a clue how you could do it though! =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: September 20, 2002 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i suddenly have the strange urge to play that song as well... if only i weren't too lazy to change the cds... oh well. the ants were my favorite! my favorite forever! it's even my msn name! yeah, i'm wierd, but aren't we all? hopefully...
i loved your story! i've followed it since it's first chapter. i think. very cut e when they got married, too. the end was great, especially when tien said, "i thought i was your girl!" that was my favorite part.
good stuff indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: TrunksLuver4ever On: August 10, 2002 21:46 EDT
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Ah man, this is the best fic I've read so far :D You HAVE to update soon... I can't wait to see what plan is running around inside Bulma's head... HEHE |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back!
Vegeta: Save yourself. Run as far away from her as you possibly can.
ssjprincess: *smacks Vegeta on the arm* It's not that bad. *snickers* But yes, I'm back, finally.
What took so long was, *glares at Vegeta* my keyboard was totally ruined. I had to go and buy a brand new keyboard because, SOMEONE had to go and push buttons.
Vegeta: *crosses arms and smirks* She dosen't care, Woman. Get on with your Kami damned review, before you bore us to sleep with your incessant chatter.
ssjprincess: Oh yeah! The review, and the beginning of Saiyan Mating Season. :)
Vegeta: O.O! I forgot about that part.
ssjprincess: *chuckles* So on with the review....
Vegeta: O.o;;
ssjprincess: What?
Vegeta: *points to the fic* *I* do *NOT* give anyone a 'come hither' look! Maybe a 'come here so I can kill you' look, but a 'come hither' look? Never!
ssjprincess: O.o; Uhhhh...yeeaahh, what he just said. *mutters* Whatever that was?
Anyway, Barney and Friends?! The horror! The horror! That would be enough torture to bring even the strongest of men to their knees.
Vegeta: Your forgetting, I'm not some weak human. I'm a Saiyan. I can handle anything that is dished out. *croses arms with a smug look planted on his Princely features*
ssjprincess: *smirks* Is that so? Barney and Friends wouldn't bother you?
Vegeta: Of course not!
ssjprincess: Well then, how about this? *pulls out a Teletubbies DVD that miraculously popped out of no where* O.o *shakes head to clear it of the cobwebs*
Vegeta: Where did that come from?
ssjprincess: *shrugs* I have no idea, but I learned a long time ago not to ask questions, cause the answers are way too scary. But back to the point, *plops the DVD into the Television, which I might add also popped in from nowhere* Watch this, while I finish the review.
Vegeta: O.o I don't know what these Telewhatsits are?
ssjprincess: *chuckles* So much the better. *walks away to finish the review*
Anyhow, this story is hilarious! I love it! I'm just not sure why I'm just now coming across it? Oh well, I found it now, so good for me. :)
I loved when Vegeta was starting to crack from the incessant happy singing of that Kami forsaken Barney; and he encountered 'Lucas the Incredibly Good Looking Elf'! What a name! lol I can't wait for the next chapter, so I guess I'll get right to it! :)
*a loud blast is heard in the distance*
ssjprincess: What the-
Vegeta: *hair singed and smoking, eye twitching, as a half crazed look covers his face*
ssjprincess: Vegeta?
Vegeta: Don't worry, Woman. I destroyed the evil. *twitch twitch*
ssjprincess: O.o the evil?
Vegeta: Those evil Teletubbies! They were creating a plan to take over the world! The evil foul-mouthed Poe is their leader!
ssjprincess: O.o *nods slowly placating the near insane Prince* Whatever you say, Vegeta. I'm going to the next chapter now. Give Vegeta Goddess a *smirks* Teletubbie bye-bye.
Vegeta: AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Sorry, for my *long and pointless* review. |
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