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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 15:47 CST
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Talk about delightful - I update in the morning and there's a new chapter by bed time! Lucky Me - I enjoyed this chapter immensely...Though I wonder, is this going to be a Kurama-Kagome-Kuwabara threesome or will the battle over Kagome's affections? Kuwabara and Kurama are so intune with each other and so observant/so what dependent on each other - that it is hard to imagine them battling for Kagome's affection, which makes the story more appealing. Please Update Soon^^
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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRAVO! I think you are doing a wonderful job illustrating the mother-son bond between Shippou and Kagome, without making Shippou seem lik a whiney brat (as he is many time portrayed) Please Update Soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: November 16, 2007 01:00 CST
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OMG~! Its Crazy Mishka/Uchiki na Kage! I havent heard from you from a long time! Its great to see a new fic out. I once again am dragged into the story like a moth to a flame. I love the details as you describe whats happening in the story. It really gives me a clear grasp of whats happening and does wonders for for my brain to animate it. The scenes flow nicely and I look forward to reading more. I particularly enjoy your descriptions for Kuwabara, too many writers portray him as an idiot or someone completely easy to see through.
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Title: Opps
Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:48 CST
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I MEANT 'or just create friendships' not "who just create"
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:47 CST
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YES! i knew that if i acted pathetic and whined enough... LINE BREAKS!! thank you, mishka! thank you, thank you!!. . . what is it now, two more chapters and you will be caught up with what you have up on fichaven? *wiggles happily!* ~ ciao! ginny
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 21:46 CST
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I don't have time to write a really strong review, but I like this fic; Its really sweet and I hope you keep it up. Kuwabara is a good contributing person in this fic, as opposed to a lot of them which portray him as an idiot. OTOH, I would expect Kurama to be fascinated by a miko who adopted a kitsune child so it is unclear if you are going to pair anyone, who just create friendships.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 14:40 CST
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it's really cool how i can 'see' different things every time i've read this (i'm rereading this as you post it here). i have been noticing the different minute nuances in the descriptions, the stances and expressions they take etc. that i didn't notice in my first reading on fichaven. . . it seems i reread a lot of your work. . . there is still a lack of 'line breaks'. check it out here, i know it's only here as there are definite 'line breaks' at fichaven and fanfiction... *whines* it's harder to read without spaces between paragraphs! *pouts* ~ a real pleasure, ginny
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 22:38 CST
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Great start! I like it so far
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 02:23 CST
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fancy meeting you here! now you have to go back and add another space between paragraphs because all of your wonderful story and pretty line breaks have gotten eaten by the evil mediaminer line break eating monster! . . . it is so wonderful to have you putting this story up on a site that is not 'closed for repairs' and will notify me of any updates! . . . (the three spaced dots symbolize the next paragraph, they won't let you separate reviews into paragraphs) . . . well enough of me, i have added you to my favorites and i shall be notified when you update here until fichaven is all better and that makes me happy. ~*dances and twirls like a 'grateful dead' groupy* ~ later then, ginny
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is cute so far. Please update soon. I'm interested to see what directions you take with it.
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Reviewed By: Sea Rhapsody On: November 10, 2007 05:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Great story! I really like it, though it could probably do with some spacing. I can't wait for the next chapter...
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