| "Naruto - Deserted Island" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 08:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter next should be with Koyuki, Shion, Sasame, Kin or maybe Tayuya. Also are you planning to write threesomes in the future because I had a lot of suggestions for you on that part update soon.
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Reviewed By: kyuubis-child On: January 13, 2009 13:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and the girls that naruto has gotten. I just have one question and it's that are you going to make any of the originally boy characters girls, and if so are will you include Kyuubi in that group, or is this going to be strictly origional girl characters? I just wanted to know but i hope that you update soon because I'm sure i'm not the only person that enjoys your story.
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Title: outstanding as always
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 12:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey loved both new fics and can't wait 4 who he gets next wouldn't mind seing ino or tenten-chan hope u had a good break and i'm waiting 4 ur next one
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Reviewed By: samurai/snowlake On: December 25, 2008 22:54 EST
Comment/Review:
great story, very well written, why not try a naru/shion/hina
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: shin akamichi On: December 21, 2008 00:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE.i love it as always.keep up the good work,good luck with christmas,and DAMN...KYUUBI LET ME RENT SOE OF THOSE VIDEOS YOUR ALWAYS RECORDING! ps,try the character sasame fuma next... seriosuly,naruto BREAST GROPED her.thatd be a funny couple.plus they love orange and have odd fashion!
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 08:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anothe hot and steamy chapter what about Anko, Ino and Koyuki the princess of the land of snow and there's also that girl that appears in Naruto movie 5 I don't know her name because I haven't seen the movie yet.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: hurtmorpheus141 On: December 18, 2008 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading fanfics like this, that and you have the relationships that are diverse and different. I like the fact that you included Yugito, she is extremely beautiful and awesome. It's also rare to see her in almost any story, so thanks for that. What characters are you thinking of adding next? If you're continuing I'd like to make a request, can you please add Anko-chan???
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Reviewed By: doomsday666 On: November 19, 2008 10:59 EST
Comment/Review:
I like all of you stories, but I think you make one with naruto and shizune, one with naruto and haku, one with naruto, tsunade, and shizune, one with naruto and anko, one with naruto, anko, and kurenai, one with naruto and ten-ten, one with naruto and ino, one with naruto, ino, and sakura, one with naruto, ten-ten, and temari, one with naruto, ino, and temari, one with naruto, hinata, and shizune, one with naruto, hinata, and sakura, one with naruto, shizune, and sakura, one with naruto, tsunade, and sakura, and one with naruto, shizune, and anko
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Title: hey this wuz great
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 07:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey loved this and i may be a shik-tem faithfull but this wuz good and it made sense lik there is a possibality of this happening can't wat 4 the nxt pairing i reli would lik 2 see ino in the near future tho good luck and can't wait 4 more
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Reviewed By: jj On: November 17, 2008 02:29 EST
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maybe you could do another threesome with sasame and isaribi
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 01:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another hot and steamy chapter I've been wondering areyou adding a Naru/Ino lemon and Naru/Tenten?
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Title: fucking win
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 21:51 EDT
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damn this wuz great i love this series i reli would lik 2 see the 2 blondes hook up (naru/ino) but omfg i loved this chap it reli reli got me hppy
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Reviewed By: BigBalls [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have a question? Are you going to do a NarutoxAnko story or not? it be a good one because you do something that connects their similar pasts. The Lemons would be extremely good to.
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Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good i cant wait for the next chapter please post the next chapter soon please (PUPPY EYE NO JUSTSU) please
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 10:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome and DAMN HOT yeah amazing that lemon was so good it really turn me on, anyway how about maing a lemon with both Sakura and Tsunade or Ino and Sakura can't wait for the next chapter.
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