| "Naruto - Deserted Island" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: Excelent chapter
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 09:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the best chapter because this is obviously what will happen in the manga everyone knows Sakura loves Naruto and those Naru/Hina fans think otherwise but they are very wrong I mean when the manga has focus on Naruto and Hinata NEVER the chances of Naruto ending up with HInata is one percent.
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Title: again knocked it outta the park with chap 4
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you keep knocking it outta the park with the pariings i reli would lik to a see an Naruto Ayame ( the ramen girl) but this was nice 2 you've mentioned Yuki alot why not use them together ? oh well what ever pairing u do i'll love probobley cuz i am a rlei big fan of this seris and if u write a new chap i'll b there to read it well gotta wrap this up it wuz great as always and u jst get better and better peace, Desgardia
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Title: Deserted Island
Reviewed By: Kira Yamato 1 On: September 24, 2008 21:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
ONe,damn...our a man of all trades arnt ya?high detail in all you write...this sounds like you took stuff from camp manuals its so detailed.!XD anyway,please...can we have em...INO NEXT?!^W^ I JUST WANNA SEE RAMBUNCTIOUS + HYPERACTIVE.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I got turn on reading this one with Tsunade wow you are the master and please I have a request for you I'm a big fan of you since you were the one that inspire me to write fan fiction PLEASE make a Naru/Saku/Ino chapter PLEASE grant me this request PLEASE.
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Title: naruto ayame
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok loved the entire thing but how come i don't see any naruto ayame fics so yea that my suggestion
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Title: yea more naru/hina fics
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my title was not scarcastic i mean it yes more of them oh and i liked the yuugo fic and i haven't read the kurenai fic yet but all an all this is a good fic and i'm gonna check out more from u
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Reviewed By: Juuchi On: August 20, 2008 18:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey what about Naruto/Kurenai/Anko heh heh *nose bleed*
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Title: Suggestion
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 07:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make a Naru/Saku/Ino lemon please.
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Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow,can we get a sequel with other characters?lol hmm...maybe naruto-sasame,naruto-sakura,naruto-ino,naruto-itachi,itachi-sakura,ino-saku ra?LOL(i like the last one alot XD)
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Sinnerboy On: December 10, 2007 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very good fanfic.. i love naru/hina fanfics so i really hope that you will get another chapter up soon really soon.. ur writing style is good keep it up.. like i said plzzzzz get another chapter up ASAP lol that would be great..
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 04:02 EST
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well to tell you the truth its a little awkward thinking or naruto doing that. other than that thought that was a great fic. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 15:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story Im glad you're writting a Naruto fanfic anyway if you like Naruto fanfics you should read my Naruto/Sailor Moon crossover its called Legend of the Moon shinobi I also have a Naru/Saku/Hina love triangle love story which has lemons its called Tammin two hearts ot breaking one anyway update soon
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Reviewed By: Dreadman mk.3 On: November 12, 2007 22:29 EST
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HOLY SHIT YOU MADE A NARUOT FANFIC!!!! O.O Never knew you had it in ya eternal =P
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this fic a lot!!! it was great!!! i really like reading naruto hinata fics i think that they make a great couple!!! any way great fic!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE FICS!!! i really like how u write!!! U ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: bob and steve On: November 11, 2007 20:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
i personaly dont like hinata naruto fics but i would like you to do another chapter of another girl mabye from one of the filler episode please!!!! naruto hinata pairing isnt that popular but its the most done and it is over used in my opinion but mabey not yours whatever it is just a request
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