| "Naruto - Deserted Island" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 04:00 EDT
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that was so damn good please get t next installment up soon im really loking forward to it
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Title: Excelent chapter
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 09:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the best chapter because this is obviously what will happen in the manga everyone knows Sakura loves Naruto and those Naru/Hina fans think otherwise but they are very wrong I mean when the manga has focus on Naruto and Hinata NEVER the chances of Naruto ending up with HInata is one percent.
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Title: again knocked it outta the park with chap 4
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you keep knocking it outta the park with the pariings i reli would lik to a see an Naruto Ayame ( the ramen girl) but this was nice 2 you've mentioned Yuki alot why not use them together ? oh well what ever pairing u do i'll love probobley cuz i am a rlei big fan of this seris and if u write a new chap i'll b there to read it well gotta wrap this up it wuz great as always and u jst get better and better peace, Desgardia
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Title: Deserted Island
Reviewed By: Kira Yamato 1 On: September 24, 2008 21:59 EDT
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ONe,damn...our a man of all trades arnt ya?high detail in all you write...this sounds like you took stuff from camp manuals its so detailed.!XD anyway,please...can we have em...INO NEXT?!^W^ I JUST WANNA SEE RAMBUNCTIOUS + HYPERACTIVE.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I got turn on reading this one with Tsunade wow you are the master and please I have a request for you I'm a big fan of you since you were the one that inspire me to write fan fiction PLEASE make a Naru/Saku/Ino chapter PLEASE grant me this request PLEASE.
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Title: naruto ayame
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok loved the entire thing but how come i don't see any naruto ayame fics so yea that my suggestion
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Title: yea more naru/hina fics
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my title was not scarcastic i mean it yes more of them oh and i liked the yuugo fic and i haven't read the kurenai fic yet but all an all this is a good fic and i'm gonna check out more from u
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Reviewed By: Juuchi On: August 20, 2008 18:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey what about Naruto/Kurenai/Anko heh heh *nose bleed*
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Title: Suggestion
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 07:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make a Naru/Saku/Ino lemon please.
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Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow,can we get a sequel with other characters?lol hmm...maybe naruto-sasame,naruto-sakura,naruto-ino,naruto-itachi,itachi-sakura,ino-saku ra?LOL(i like the last one alot XD)
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Sinnerboy On: December 10, 2007 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very good fanfic.. i love naru/hina fanfics so i really hope that you will get another chapter up soon really soon.. ur writing style is good keep it up.. like i said plzzzzz get another chapter up ASAP lol that would be great..
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 04:02 EST
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well to tell you the truth its a little awkward thinking or naruto doing that. other than that thought that was a great fic. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 15:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story Im glad you're writting a Naruto fanfic anyway if you like Naruto fanfics you should read my Naruto/Sailor Moon crossover its called Legend of the Moon shinobi I also have a Naru/Saku/Hina love triangle love story which has lemons its called Tammin two hearts ot breaking one anyway update soon
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Reviewed By: Dreadman mk.3 On: November 12, 2007 22:29 EST
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HOLY SHIT YOU MADE A NARUOT FANFIC!!!! O.O Never knew you had it in ya eternal =P
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this fic a lot!!! it was great!!! i really like reading naruto hinata fics i think that they make a great couple!!! any way great fic!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE FICS!!! i really like how u write!!! U ROCK!!!
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