| "Not according to plan" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 04:42 CDT
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this is so good, i wonder what will happen when kagome realizes that she can get inuyasha to do almost anything to prevent her from going on the news and crying that the big mean movie star wants to turn a shrine into an office building. can they even do that, what about the fact that it's a historical landmark and stuff?
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT story. I love the battle going on between Inuyasha and Kagome. Yasha is such a jerk at this point that you can't feel sorry for him at all. And he's certainly met his match with Kagome. That wine, the vinegar....the knee...all of it was very well done. I've been wanting to read an AU like this, where Kagome isn't a whiny wimp. I look forward to seeing where you take this next.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 20:04 CST
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Hee hee hee. Inuyasha gets his just deserts. He deserves anything Kagome does to him for his attitude. Thanks for the great Inu/Kag pairing, they are getting harder to find. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 21:46 CST
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I'm interested to see what happens. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 03:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems that kagome& inuyasha just don't get along yet... hope kagome's family keep the shrine... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_girl_kagome2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 21:10 CST
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nice really cool. Please update soon ^...^
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Reviewed By: Milady On: November 26, 2007 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems ineresting so far... I hope you update it soon...
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 08:38 CST
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Kool, nice chapter, I see you improved in just one chapter O.o lol nice I like it and it was funny. keep em coming
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Title: BWAAAAH!
Reviewed By: Auraidne On: November 24, 2007 08:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.^ I'm all excited now! I've been slightly bored recently, and haven't really found many decent fanfics. You're story, however, has a classic, hilarious story with your own original twist! Yay! A massive well done, I can't wait to see how the plot continues! *hyper and happy!* See, I would give you criticism, but it would be unbelievably hypocritical of me, pffft. Only thing I would say is make it a teeny bit longer, and it'll be a really successful fanfic. Wooo! I love you're story already, and you only have 2 chapters up! Hahaha! No pressure, bwahahahaha. You'll probably hear from me again about this fanfic, so good luck with the rest of the chapters!!!!! *cough* Update soon *cough cough* o^.^o
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 03:45 CST
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you really know how to milk a laugh, not only is the situation funny but then you time the responses just right... an example would be the sango/miroku responses to yasha's account of his encounter with kagome. you made us wait while you distracted us a bit until they responded... it made it seem a lot funnier than if they would have reacted right away. . . the inner dialog, the repartee was very amusing. i'm eagerly looking forward to reading more. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Masojai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really looking forward to reading the rest! It's a unique idea and you wrote it out wonderfully!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 18:09 CST
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that was funny
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Reviewed By: mommy On: November 19, 2007 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'll admit i am a little over inuyasha being famous in a lot of stories, but i like how tihs is going. it seems that it'll prove to be very intertaining, and maybe have a little romance? but hopefully a comedy, i'm in the need for a GOOD comedy hopefully this will turn out to be fun!
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 19:40 CST
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its a keeper ^^ beautious writings, dearest. update regggularly!!
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