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Title: o.0
Reviewed By: LostMyShoeInSheol [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story sucks only for one reason, you havent updated in almost 2 years T.T ish good and intresting and it sounds like you have more planned out, please continue for the mental well being of all who read it :D
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Title: O.O T-T
Reviewed By: Foaly123 On: September 04, 2009 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon my boredom limits were reached 3 and a half weeks ago. good fanfic though
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Title: CONTINUE!!!!
Reviewed By: Ravengun On: August 06, 2009 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz continue the story i read it on adultfanfiction and i fell in love with this story it looks like the end would be great plz finish it!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: zenate On: February 28, 2009 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a very good fic i like its so far but you need to update
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Title: Next chapter?
Reviewed By: Sean_the_one On: September 22, 2008 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far, and I really wanna see it continued, I'm looking forward to the whole harem thing, you know, the reasonfor the FIC? XD well..anyways, please update soon :D thanks
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Reviewed By: the reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a very enjoyable and oringinal fanfic cant wait for next chapter.
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Reviewed By: black fox dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 21:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i have to say that this is an interesting way to take the naruto theme but i've seen some really weird things so this has my vote. can't wait for the update. looking forward to it actually.
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: JadedGothButterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 16:00 CDT
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I Love This Fic.Original,It Has Attitude,And I Love The Vixen Inside Naruto...Also His Brainy Side. You Write Brilliantly. I Hope To Read More. I'm Waiting Especially For NaruHina. =D
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 18:33 CDT
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*giggles* I'm highly amused with the fic plot and where its going. please do continue with it, I look forward to how you continue.
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Reviewed By: Predhack [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed this thus far. I couldn't include all my comments in this box and I wouldn't feel comfortable doing so anyway so I sent them to you in the email your provided in your profile. Overall, the entire things hold together very well and I look forward to seeing where this is going. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: TheMaskedReviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! TMR here. First of all, I want to say that I'm thoroughly enloying the story so far. I am curious about something. Naruto's sudden exposure to so much new knowledge seems to have made him more mature...will this be the end of his female form? I was wondering if Naruko would make an appearance. To tell you the truth, I thought Naruto would...assist Hinata in exploring her sexuality. That, of course, brings up the whole question of whether Naruko counts as female...Ah! Sorry, sorry, I'm rambling. Great story, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!, TMR
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Reviewed By: crazy8s On: June 22, 2008 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is fuck'n awsome please keep on writing
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Reviewed By: Miheran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 07:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
it is good to see a writer who writes for themselfs and doesn't listen to what reviews say. i found a couple of storys that were good to beguin with but then because people didn't like certin couples or didn't like where it was leading that made the writer change from there original story, i even found one that made a writer write a story that he ended up hating so he just stopped writing it. even though i prefer long chapters, i've found that they are still at a god small enjoyable length. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nightmare the Shrike [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!!!!!!! I so want this story to be continued.
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Reviewed By: Trogdor On: May 04, 2008 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for you'z!!! ^________________^ nice fic, U=FTW lol. I know I am hard to understand, but I hope you do!!! ummm... I have absolutly no problems with your fic =)
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Reviewed By: Roark On: April 27, 2008 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished rereading what you have written for the fourth or fifth time, and I just found it more enjoyable. Most stories just get less so the more you read them, so good job. Are you alright? You have not posted for a while, so I wanted to check on you. If you are experiencing writer's block, it might help to read what you have written, read something that put the idea into your head in the first place, or find a fic that is so painful to read that it motivates you to start writing again. Please, if you are unwell, get well soon; and if it is writer's block, try to find something to inspire yourself. If you have just been overly busy, then I hope things slow down, or atleast start taking less time soon. Until you post again.
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Title: snowecat
Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 15:33 CDT
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This is shaping up to be a good read. What is the strange vat and what does it do to women? Don't give up just because not many people review your story. I really like what the kids did in the last chapter. Will their Words have Power or no? Will they go to Wave or will Kakashi's team go? Did he even pass a team? Hope you update soon.
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Title: Need summoning ideas
Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why don't you just give Naruto the ability to summon Aeons from Final Fantasy X
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Reviewed By: Neo Tenro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 11:48 CDT
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the fic, its hard to say ( because every1 has said sum thing I normly would say that is positve about any fic.) and I agree with d2killerz about not give up on this like other fic/authors. because thats what others do so keep it going, ok? 1 more thing update soon
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking the story so far, you have interesting and unique ideas to the standard "Kyuubi influence makes Naruto a pimp" story. I don't care much about what summons you use for Naruto, but I would prefer his original toad summons to foxes. Because summoning the Kyuubi (which should technically be impossible because she doesn't have a body anymore) has the distinct possibility of overpowering Naruto, which can make the story cliche and not as fun to read. As long as you keep out of Marty Stu territory it should be good now matter what summons you pick though. Thanks for writing and I eagerly look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Narukyuforeva On: March 08, 2008 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is one of the best stories I have ever read, not just on this site, but on every site! I absolutely LOVE your character development between Naruto and everyone else, especially Hinata, and I think his want to be the worlds greatest lover is really original too! Rock on man!
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 11:15 CST
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(squeals) Wow!!! I've never read a fic like this-honestly I really haven't. I was so into KakaSaku I didn't rerally look at the othe rplants in the garden. But I like it-it's definetely unique and amazing and stuff. I hope you update soon? And I know this is a very silly question, but will you be creating OC's for the purpose of belonging to Naruto's Harem, or are you going to keep within the bounds of what you have? I know, it's a silly question, but I thought I'd ask. ^^
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Reviewed By: J&H On: January 19, 2008 17:06 CST
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This story seems to be progressing at a good pace and has lots of potentla for originality. As for a summen contract I have a few ideas, but I'm not sure if you'll like them they are, the tiger contract, the wolf contract, and the pest contract. The wolf and tiger are obveusly more combat oreented, but the pest contract would be more for servalence use, I call it the pest as its not exclusive to one animel but consists mostly of animles considers pests in citys and other urban areas ie rats/mice/ racoons domestic cats and the like
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 18, 2008 21:02 CST
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I really am enjoying your story! I have to say that contrary to what you stated earlier there are people out there that like Saske and I happen to be one of them. I find him to be intreging even though there are times in the magna and the series that I have wanted to kick his ass. For some reason I like the fact that he brods over things, quick whitted, and pompous. Enough of that ...Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ino should have a pig or bird contract and hinata should also have a bird contract.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 10:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey Arch, great story and long time no see. This is starting to look very interesting, I hope you can get the next chapter up soon. And don't forget if you need help or a beta reader, I'm your guy. Anyway, talk to ya later -Dragonmaster TC
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 22:51 CST
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Your doing a good job keep it up not much to say about this chapter.
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 10:12 CST
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I'm enjoying this a lot. Thanks and keep up the good work.
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Title: New reviewer
Reviewed By: d2killerz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe I shall be a new reviewer/obsessed fan of yours. An awesome fic for sure~ Hopefully you will continue updating and not give up on this like other fic/authors. If you need any help just email me at d2killerz@yahoo.com or if you need a proofreader.
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Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 03:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job on the story so far, I'm hoping that you'll be able to post the next chapter soon.
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