| "Vixens and Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Roark On: April 27, 2008 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished rereading what you have written for the fourth or fifth time, and I just found it more enjoyable. Most stories just get less so the more you read them, so good job. Are you alright? You have not posted for a while, so I wanted to check on you. If you are experiencing writer's block, it might help to read what you have written, read something that put the idea into your head in the first place, or find a fic that is so painful to read that it motivates you to start writing again. Please, if you are unwell, get well soon; and if it is writer's block, try to find something to inspire yourself. If you have just been overly busy, then I hope things slow down, or atleast start taking less time soon. Until you post again.
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Title: snowecat
Reviewed By: snowecat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 15:33 CDT
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This is shaping up to be a good read. What is the strange vat and what does it do to women? Don't give up just because not many people review your story. I really like what the kids did in the last chapter. Will their Words have Power or no? Will they go to Wave or will Kakashi's team go? Did he even pass a team? Hope you update soon.
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Title: Need summoning ideas
Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why don't you just give Naruto the ability to summon Aeons from Final Fantasy X
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Reviewed By: Neo Tenro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 11:48 CDT
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the fic, its hard to say ( because every1 has said sum thing I normly would say that is positve about any fic.) and I agree with d2killerz about not give up on this like other fic/authors. because thats what others do so keep it going, ok? 1 more thing update soon
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Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking the story so far, you have interesting and unique ideas to the standard "Kyuubi influence makes Naruto a pimp" story. I don't care much about what summons you use for Naruto, but I would prefer his original toad summons to foxes. Because summoning the Kyuubi (which should technically be impossible because she doesn't have a body anymore) has the distinct possibility of overpowering Naruto, which can make the story cliche and not as fun to read. As long as you keep out of Marty Stu territory it should be good now matter what summons you pick though. Thanks for writing and I eagerly look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Narukyuforeva On: March 08, 2008 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is one of the best stories I have ever read, not just on this site, but on every site! I absolutely LOVE your character development between Naruto and everyone else, especially Hinata, and I think his want to be the worlds greatest lover is really original too! Rock on man!
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 11:15 CST
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(squeals) Wow!!! I've never read a fic like this-honestly I really haven't. I was so into KakaSaku I didn't rerally look at the othe rplants in the garden. But I like it-it's definetely unique and amazing and stuff. I hope you update soon? And I know this is a very silly question, but will you be creating OC's for the purpose of belonging to Naruto's Harem, or are you going to keep within the bounds of what you have? I know, it's a silly question, but I thought I'd ask. ^^
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Reviewed By: J&H On: January 19, 2008 17:06 CST
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This story seems to be progressing at a good pace and has lots of potentla for originality. As for a summen contract I have a few ideas, but I'm not sure if you'll like them they are, the tiger contract, the wolf contract, and the pest contract. The wolf and tiger are obveusly more combat oreented, but the pest contract would be more for servalence use, I call it the pest as its not exclusive to one animel but consists mostly of animles considers pests in citys and other urban areas ie rats/mice/ racoons domestic cats and the like
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 18, 2008 21:02 CST
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I really am enjoying your story! I have to say that contrary to what you stated earlier there are people out there that like Saske and I happen to be one of them. I find him to be intreging even though there are times in the magna and the series that I have wanted to kick his ass. For some reason I like the fact that he brods over things, quick whitted, and pompous. Enough of that ...Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ino should have a pig or bird contract and hinata should also have a bird contract.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 10:11 CST
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Hey Arch, great story and long time no see. This is starting to look very interesting, I hope you can get the next chapter up soon. And don't forget if you need help or a beta reader, I'm your guy. Anyway, talk to ya later -Dragonmaster TC
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 22:51 CST
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Your doing a good job keep it up not much to say about this chapter.
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 10:12 CST
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I'm enjoying this a lot. Thanks and keep up the good work.
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Title: New reviewer
Reviewed By: d2killerz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe I shall be a new reviewer/obsessed fan of yours. An awesome fic for sure~ Hopefully you will continue updating and not give up on this like other fic/authors. If you need any help just email me at d2killerz@yahoo.com or if you need a proofreader.
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Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 03:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job on the story so far, I'm hoping that you'll be able to post the next chapter soon.
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