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| "Goten's Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: master yoshi On: June 05, 2010 02:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was fun, but will videl be into a 3some though? videl can do it with her dad mr satan in order to get even. 4 some with videl, gohan, chi-chi, and satan
| Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have to say, Goten's part in this is actually one of my favorites parts of this; that was cute how you set it up. And as for the meat of the piece - another part that sticks out is that image of Gohan undoing Chichi's bun, running his fingers through it, right before everything starts. You did good with the imagery; and Chichi, thoughts and all, were really well characterized, i think she was captured really well, which seams hard to come by a lot. Good job!
| Title: Quite the Piece
Reviewed By: Quirk_Smirk On: February 20, 2009 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very enjoyable piece of writing. It pays proper respect to all the aspect of DBZ. I never really thought of a coupling/threesome for Videl, Gohan and ChiChi but but then again I think ChiChi should be celebate so.... Your very vivid descriptions easily make lust and interest take over, just as it does for the characters. (i couldn't stop reading...)
| Reviewed By: You pervert On: April 04, 2008 14:38 CDT
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You bastard. You mother-fucking, filthy, depraved bastard. How dare you sate your lecherous behavior by vilifying the beautiful relationship that Gohan and Videl have?! You pile of dog-shit! STOP RUINING GOHAN'S CHARACTER! YOU PIG'S CUNT!
| Reviewed By: YOU FUCKINF SHIT! On: March 17, 2008 16:18 CDT
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WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU, YOU STUPID UGLY PERVERT!!!? CHICHI?!! As if! You sick pedophile! Gohan would never be with anyone besides Videl!! How dare you say that motherfuckingcunt-of-a-bitch LIME would ever be with Gohan?!!! YOU ARE SICK, YOU SORRY SHIT!! I demand that you stop writing this shit NOW!!! FUCKIND DROP DEAD, LEWIS (HA! what an ugly name!)
| Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfics are always the best :) Looking foward to the next 1.
| Reviewed By: JTS On: December 02, 2007 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well another masterpiece, I can see it as well, she's been left alone for so long that she must by horny as hell! Anyway keep it up, your fics are fantastic, maybe you should do Gohan/Chichi/Videl.
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