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Reviewed By: _shinchansgirl_ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heya! I know I don't come around and review very often, but I really enjoy your story, and think you should continue it. It feels like it's drawing to a close, but, from what I can tell, you haven't updated in nearly a year. I hope you haven't abandoned this yet. I would really enjoy reading more, and if it would help you to have a beta or someone to talk to about it, I'd be more than willing to help give you plot bunnies. If you'd like to contact me, my email is fluffydemonkitty@aim.com , and my AIM screen name is fluffydemonkitty . Please don't give up on this - I know it can take a while for those bunnies to show themselves, but they do come around! And you aren't forgotten, either. There are still people reading this fic and hoping for an ending.
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Reviewed By: Amy Hirosaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you, I read your fic the other day, and I couldn't just leave it unreviewed by me ^^ It's an awesome fic, what I love very much. The characters, the way you put them into your fic, absolutely amazing! I love duo and his naivety. Quatre, with his cool painter-boyfriend :O and heero is just WOW! .... your fic is so fantastic, and I can't wait to see it updated! This is one of the best GW-fics I've ever read, and I hope you'll continue this one soon, becasue I think I'm getting addicted at your fics :O heh heh ... really!! Can't help it!!! ^__^ you're fic is über-cool... and that's a fact! @_@
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Title: Update!!
Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 21:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow you updated, I'm so happy, just don't stop, keep writing! Ja ne
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Title: Update!!!!
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you updated, i am so happy, great just do not stop! Work you finger to the bone and finish, finish!!!
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Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Please finish it! :)
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Reviewed By: Sara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:25 CDT
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About time! But it's as perfect as ever! Heero KNOWS ! didn't expected that! wow... He loves Duo so much! Hope Duo won't be hurt by this ba**** Milliardo! More !!!!
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Title: i hope this make sense *yawns, really sleepy*
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!! I finally caught up, oh please this is a wonderful story and I can only plead that you not wait so long to update again I would love to see how everything turns out! I noticed in chapter 11 the following was said "Dorothy did not want to tell Duo that ever since the night she had read the cards, she had been certain that Milliardo was the one who..." From Chapter 4 it was Cathy who read the cards and but could she have told Dorthy about it? In the two latest chapters I saw less of him/her confusion but there was some switching in labeling duo as 'wife' at one point *its really late here and I don't remember where exactly* when everywhere else Duo was considered 'husband'... I'm sorry if I over step my boundaries, but it's not that I'm against Duo and Quat in dresses 'cuz their both quite beautiful, but i was just wondering why it was decided that they wear dresses for all formal occassions? Thank you so much for updating this fic, I would not have known about it and had a chance to enjoy it otherwise. Have a good week.
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Title: ch9
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man FINALLY!!! a break, something that Duo has, proof, that Millardo isn't all he seems to be.
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Title: ch5
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I notice that often, when you speak of duo you interchange is gender between he and she... you do this more often with him\her... intentional? Is Duo a hermaphrodite?! that would be perfect knowing the meaning of the root words that make up this word. *hurries to next chapter*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
*glomps S. Rose* I'm glad you twerked it!
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*pouts* frilly dresses...*then smiles* they were beautiful dresses back then but man everyone is obessesed in putting Duo and Quat in dresses.
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Title: Ch2
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 19:07 CDT
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*squeals in utter delight* THANK YOU DOTTY!!! I'm so happy that Duo and Quat got rescued from Mueller!!
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Title: Ch! oops 1
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:41 CDT
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*priscel is estatic!!* I found a few typos... "Duo asked the question more to herself than to..." himself right, unless I read it wrong and 'Treize told Duo to follow hi, and ...' 'hi' should be 'him' right? *beams* Onward to more story!!
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Title: prologue
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT DAMN!! Where has this juicy tale of story been! I'm soooooo HAPPY you continued it and boy i can't wait to continue reading it! *glomps S.Rose and disappears with a whispery 'thank you'*
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Reviewed By: annonie On: September 04, 2004 16:44 CDT
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Your story is good but you seem to get the genders mixed up quite often. Duo seems to switch from a he to a she, and from being called a husband to a wife enough that it becomes a bit distracting to the story and leaves me wondering... you're not copying this from a book are you?
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