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Reviewed By: leemax^_^ On: September 04, 2004 14:12 CDT
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Man have I been waiting for this to continue for a very long time. I want to know more. I can't wait till the next part. Oh how I wish it will continue. More More More More More
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Reviewed By: Dilandaus lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Dilandaus lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Dilandaus lover On: June 22, 2004 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the joys of just casually surfing the net for a ff worth reading. i came across this fic totally by accident, the other night, on a search for a load of fics to burn to disc to read in my spare time and today i came to reading yours. And blow me i couldn't stop reading it. I had to pause once simply because the need to eat was too great and even then i was straight back onto my laptop within a min >< I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for such an excellent read. My only disappointment was when i came to the end of chapter 10 and realised there was no more to read. Distraught i think is the right word for it >
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Title: Can't wait for more!
Reviewed By: BitterSweetAsh On: April 21, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a lovely story. I read it a few months ago and I can't wait for a new chapter to come out. If you want help editing, I would be happy to beta for you. I'm a bit of a grammar geek and I'd love to help you so you can churn out another wonderful chapter!! ashley_kamine@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Yaoigoddess On: April 20, 2004 18:38 CDT
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God, you better damn well update soon! This story is amazing!
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Reviewed By: annonie On: April 19, 2004 04:11 CDT
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Though this is a story that rivals the paperback romances, I can't help but feel uncomfortable about Duo wearing a dress. Why did you do that? It detracts from your story instead of adding to it. He could have easily have been decked out beautifully as a man in Victorian era clothing, the dress part is just weird. As a man in a dress during that ear he would have been shunned if not stoned. And what was the thing about Heero seeing Duo with THEIR child on his lap? Please, you've stretched history about the marraige, are you going to have Duo pregnant too? That's a bit much. As long as you're making revisions, (and this is only my humble opinion) you should get rid of the dresses and don't do the male pregnancy thing. It will make your story more believable.
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Reviewed By: ens On: April 18, 2004 19:30 CDT
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I'm damn happy that you're back in the swing of things... I missed reading your story. I hope that you will update it soon and complete it... I'm dying to know how this things gonna end!
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Reviewed By: Enjen On: April 14, 2004 03:30 CDT
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i would've really liked it if you had continued this fic since you left such a cliffhanger. i really hope you do too, but it seems as if it's been awhile since you last updated. nevertheless, i continue to hope.
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Reviewed By: anne boleyn On: March 15, 2004 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this one please continue.I beg of you.pppppppppppppllllllllease
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Reviewed By: alithiela On: November 20, 2003 13:30 CST
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I guess you do not mean to continue, since you have not updated for seven months. Shame reall. This fic was one of the best i have ever read, if not THE best.
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Reviewed By: Vay On: November 07, 2003 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Are you going to continue this fic? Please?
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Title: Ohhh wonderful
Reviewed By: Ishtra On: November 05, 2003 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh I have fallen in love with this story, the torn Duo - can't say I haven't been in his shoes - though not in as extreme a case as this... Oh and I agree - how could you stop it here? Then again it is 12 midnight and I should be sleeping but nonetheless I love this story and am moved to comment. I hope to see more updating ^_^
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Reviewed By: Derstinys lot On: November 04, 2003 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. I'm truly enjoying it. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: AikoNamika On: October 16, 2003 01:17 CDT
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O.O You're stopping it right there? How could you just stop it right there?! It was getting really, really, interesting, and I go to click on the link for the next part once I finish the chapter, and THERE'S NOTHING THERE!!! ...WRITE MORE!!!! ...please?
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