| "Picture" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: September 11, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Nice fic, only one thing is wrong. It's not FINISHED! ::aggrivated sigh:: and I was so enjoying myself! Come on! Update! Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with cherries and whipped cream and sprinkles and all other kinds of good stuff on top? |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
What? WHAT?
You have it marked as completed... but where's the REST of it???
I enjoyed it so far, please continue! |
Reviewed By: kitte On: June 10, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the style of this fic is great but you have a tendency to use different gender titles. Some of your spelling is weird because when you were typing this i think you hit the wrong key. I have not read a fic like this any where else, it is awesome. If you where to change the characters names, and make Duo a she instead of a he, i think you could publish this and make some money. well any ways i am looking forward to the next chapters. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's verry good. The main thing is the spelling. I was wondering if you were originally writing this for a girl and Heero, because I keep seeing her and she instead of him and he. It's really disturbing sometimes. X.x Anyway, it's really good, and I think I read this from somewhere else that it was archived at... a long time ago. Anyway update and tell me when you do!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Captain Retardo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Premise reminds me of the red violin |
Reviewed By: Selevera On: April 12, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!!!!!! Please don't let Duo go through with it, don't let him betray Heero!!! You have *got* to write more!
I was sooo happy when I finally rechecked your page and found not one but two chapters! You're doing a wonderful job, and I am eagerly awaiting more!
Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: April 11, 2003 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, you've got everything I like into this story! I absolutely love it! Please do continue this soon, it's hard going on without knowing what's going to happen! You have superb writing skills and a knack for detail [there are some mistakes with grammar, but I've looked far beyond that]. I really hope to read more chapters of this wonderful fic soon! |
Reviewed By: XplayinwitdeathX On: April 11, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, suspense! Suspense! I'm itching to know what happens next. Please update again soon. It's really good. |
Reviewed By: 102000 On: April 11, 2003 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry. Meant Chapter 4 |
Reviewed By: 102000 On: April 11, 2003 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As for the review by Anonymous I think you didn't read Chapter 3 well enough because at the bottom it says and I quote "...yeah, yeah. I know. I tweaked with the timeline. I made homosexual marriages acceptable. In all times..." see It was explained at the baginning. And what are AU's for if not for changing the already existing things into whatever you want.
Write more please? soon! |
Reviewed By: XplayinwitdeathX On: April 08, 2003 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, wierd rating system but anyway, I really really liked your fanfic. You've got me all anxious to find out what happens next. Please write more and finish it soon!
-ENS |
Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I am totally enjoying this AU setting. I can't help but feel a bit sorry for Duo and the current situation he is in. That last chapter was a beat of a cliffhanger when Heero commented about Noin. *sighs dramatically* I can't wait to see this fic completed. Keep up the amazing work! |
Reviewed By: Rae On: March 17, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEED MORE!! This fic is awesome and I cannot wait for more. Please post soon ir else I will go mad!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Allylandra On: March 11, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful fic i must have more i will be bombarding you for as long as i have to pleaseeee! i will give you a cookie |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 10, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, what a writer you are. Love the story. I do hope you continue to the end, it would be a shame not to. Ill look forward to updates |
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