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| ""Aiji"" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a sweet and wonderful ending to an amazingly adorable trilogy, you never fail to make reading a true pleasure
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 01:10 CDT
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| Reviewed By: critical eye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 15:20 CST
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OOOOOHHH! A little Hiei, just what I was dreaming of. And the comment about Yukina is so true, very nice but not very bright- a perfect match to Kazuma. My nephew was born two days ago and my sister was practically glowing and gushing how beautiful he was and all I could think was wow, Hiei is right. I just hope he will be as cute as his three year old brother whom I love dearly.
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 20:26 CST
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So charming. So romantic. So sweet. So MORONIC of Hiei to take Kagome into the Makai in her condition, and EVEN MORE moronic of Kagome to not TELL him she was in labor. But really really funny with the nesting, and SO TRUE. It was hysterical. This was a lovely little one shot (really chapter 3 of your koibito series) and really cute with the pool on "boy, girl; youkai, hanyou, human, other; and date of delivery" Not sure how he turned out as a full blooded ice youkai, but who cares... it was cute. I like the way you think of the little things in your writing, such as a simple sentence about Hiei remembering to pick up the hiroseki stones that his son cried. Boy, if that baby cries anything like a normal baby, Hiei & Kagome are fixed for life financially with those stones I get the impression a few of them could put a kid through Harvard. I also liked the bit about the newborn "isn't he gorgeous?" "uh... if you say so" So TRUE.
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 18:08 CST
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Aww! What a lovely new year piece!! I loved it!! Hehe, can just imagine Kagome darting about cleaning, while Hiei grumbled and makes her sit down!! The Baby sounded soo cute- Hiei makes such a good father!! Love the characterisations, as always, perfect! Hope you had a great new year!!
| Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 15:14 CST
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Aw, how sweet! =D I like, and I'm kinda sorry this little series is over, but it's just right the way it is I think. Thank you for the present!
| Reviewed By: seiteki_tenshi@hotmail.com On: January 02, 2008 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! i love it! this may be the 2nd best gift i got for christmas...i had a baby the day after christmas, so, kagome and i were kinda in the same situation...i remember the cleaning...i was scrubbing down walls...the bricks on our fireplace even got washed...(dont ask...i dont see the reasoning in it now, but i sure did then...) you described the nesting instint so perfectly! i like how hiei thought birth was messy...lol! he's a killer, and yet birth is messy...guys are so funny like that sometimes. i cant believe hiei didnt think his son was beautiful, but then again, its hiei...i'm sure thats how it would be.
| Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 01:04 CST
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Haha! That was great! I haven't read the other two that came before this, so when I get time I will! :D Hiei was marvelous in this - you have him down again! I love the fact that Yusuke and Hiei were actually cleaning. Be still my heart - there is hope for them yet! And, how he loved his sister dearly, but she wasn't that bright! Haha - I cracked up at that point. Since I haven't read the previous two, this may sound naive, but I love how it was a Christmas present, or rather a late Christmas present. Iit is such a sweet, romantic idea. :D Keep up the good work, can't wait to read your next chapters/updates! ~ BoxingKing
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 01:01 CST
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=/ but he's so short! . . . nesting, i was moving furniture around with my son. . . that was sweet. one could tell you have lived through childbirth, experience brings out all of those gory details. ~ ja, ginny
| Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESH!!! I luv it! So cute! And Hiei not thinking the baby was "beautiful", priceless! :D lol! hehe Poor Kagome, being so fidgity :P but, cleaning the corners on the counter? 0.0 wtf?! holy crap! anyhoo, its so awesome and cute, and i want a baby like that! *giggles* *glomp* yay, OOC Hiei is awesome! :D would you get mad at me if i draw the whole family? :D i wanna do an OOC Hiei really bad!
| Title: Squeal!
Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 21:20 CST
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*squiggles happily* I absolutely love you. lol. I can so picture Kagome trying to ignore her labour contractions in order to spend some quality time with her man...and his reaction! Ahahaha!
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