| "The Assassin's Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: De On: March 10, 2008 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this fic. Although it did have a repeated theme (Kagome gets stranded on her side of the well only to meet someon from her past) I loved this new twist on it. Although sometimes Seshoumaru comes across as... a little OOC it's in an enjoyable way. Like porn. That's always enjoyable. ;) Maybe think about writing a sequel? I burst out laughing anytime I think about Kagome trying to handle a modern-day Sess. LMFAO
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Reviewed By: blackjack.17 On: March 08, 2008 12:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best Sess/Kags oneshots EVER! I think I might need to take a cold shower. I know that you said that you didn't want to do anymore, but you seriously should. It was really good, but I'm glad that you added that extra chapter. I just love it when Sesshomaru talks dirty.
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Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 09:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I read this last night before I went to sleep and I just have to say....WOW! this was sooooo good it kept me up an extra hour after I was done reading it. The story kept playing over in my head and I just wanted to read it again....in fact I just might do that. XD i even suggested it to one of my roommates. XD I hope to read more of your stuff in the near future
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Reviewed By: ingidoo On: January 29, 2008 03:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE! I love it! Couple dumb typos here and there (like i care?) but it was absolutely great. So fantastically naughty! Sometimes I find myself bored with the same 'ol smut, but your sexy scenes bring back the heat! :0P I liked how you delved into Sess's reasons for being crazy about her, it made it more realistic and brought out the flow. Overall, it was very enjoyable. :0)
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 01:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals with delight * I left for the weekend and had my baby and came home to this awesome follow up to your one shot *bows with gratitude* thank you so very much and I look forward to reading any and all of your future works
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Reviewed By: jstdreamgrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very sad I don't have time to write you this long review about how good your one-shot is. All I can say though, is that I feel the same way as a lot of your reviewers. I think you got talent and it would be nice if you would make this one-shot into something more.
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG AWESOME AGAIN!!! Please keep this one going. I'm interested to see where this story could go.
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Reviewed By: LadyCupid190 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was completely original! It was refreshingly creative and I can only wish for more.
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Reviewed By: lunawave5 On: January 18, 2008 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, it does feel more complete now. I would still like it to go on but this will have to do (for now). It sucks that sesshoumaru could never love and frankly I don't believe that he can't. I mean even if he doesn't show it, I know that at lest he has a fondness for rin. So why not kagome.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you are sooooooo freaking cool!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 19:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
akward!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but intresting. update soon. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really was wonderful. I know that you don't want to continue it(*cries*), but I am so glad that you did add on to it. A really good oneshot should always leave the reader ready to sell their soul for it to continue but knowing that it would just be an act of filling in the blanks or ruining a perfectly good story. Truthfully, I would eagerly read it is you wrote a few more chapters to this, but I think it's pretty clear what will happen from here. Of course we may not know the little ins and outs (no pun intended) and all of the bigger questions like if they continue to see each other until Kagome dies and what will be said if anything to the Higurashi family... the only way a story like this could be continued without just filling in the blanks would be if there was some twist added and twists have the potential to ruin the perfect moments before it happened... So, yeah... It was great, I loved it and I would eagerly read it if you continued it, but I get that you don't want to.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 15:32 EST
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this is great update soon please
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Title: The Assassins Seduction
Reviewed By: DossChick On: January 18, 2008 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic!!!:) Yeah its a lil dirty & out of character for Seesshou but I like how it makes him appear.;" Please continue this story for me. I would spend the rest of my life envisoning a possible future over and over if you don't..so PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!! Onegai, onegai and ashiteru for the chaps you've already made!:)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 15:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't really find Sesshoumaru that out of character. Five hundred years of unrequited lust can do wonders to the mind and body, I would imagine. I also liked the way you had Kagome react, in the beginning. I suppose it would be rather hard for her to believe that it was really him, until he started spouting off those things about Inuyasha. All in all I really enjoyed this two-shot; I'm glad that you made the decision to add the sequel.
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